Haiku(riversides brownish reeds)
Reverse Haiku13 total reviews
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author,
Loved this Reverse Haiku. I've not seen these before tonight. I loved the image you found to go with it. They paired together so well. My favorite is the center line... 'frosted white like beads'
Good luck!
Susan :)
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Hello Author,
Loved this Reverse Haiku. I've not seen these before tonight. I loved the image you found to go with it. They paired together so well. My favorite is the center line... 'frosted white like beads'
Good luck!
Susan :)
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and nice presentation.
-Effective nature imagery and rhyme.
-A very good second line with a good comparison.
-A couple of small things:
*line one has 6 syllables. A simple fix is add 'the' at the beginning
*in the last line I would change 'by' to 'as'
-Otherwise you have a good entry.
-Good luck!
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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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-Good image and nice presentation.
-Effective nature imagery and rhyme.
-A very good second line with a good comparison.
-A couple of small things:
*line one has 6 syllables. A simple fix is add 'the' at the beginning
*in the last line I would change 'by' to 'as'
-Otherwise you have a good entry.
-Good luck!
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Great review & useful commentary.Zanya
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You are very welcome, zanya, and congratulations on your win in the contest.
Comment from JT traveller
Excellent reverse Haiku. Meets all the contest rules and in such a vivid way. Your choice of colours is wonderful. They represent the flow of seasonal changes. Best of luck in the competition.
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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Excellent reverse Haiku. Meets all the contest rules and in such a vivid way. Your choice of colours is wonderful. They represent the flow of seasonal changes. Best of luck in the competition.
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
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