Haiku(riversides brownish reeds)
Reverse Haiku13 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
zanya,
This is a brilliant Reverse Haiku contest entry deserving of a first place win. A six star review is especially applicable as it confirms your talent and skill met the challenge of this contest and was victorious. Well done.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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zanya,
This is a brilliant Reverse Haiku contest entry deserving of a first place win. A six star review is especially applicable as it confirms your talent and skill met the challenge of this contest and was victorious. Well done.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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And thanks again for those 6 stars & apology for late reply. zanya
Comment from Sally Law
So sorry to be late to this party. Life has been more difficult at the moment. A splendid haiku in this unique reversed form. Beautifully penned and illustrated too. Sending you my very best and congratulations, Zanya!
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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So sorry to be late to this party. Life has been more difficult at the moment. A splendid haiku in this unique reversed form. Beautifully penned and illustrated too. Sending you my very best and congratulations, Zanya!
Sal XOs
Comment Written 08-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi zanya
Congratulations on your win for you lovely reversed Haiku Nicely presented and worded a deserved win for the contest a bit different than others
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Hi zanya
Congratulations on your win for you lovely reversed Haiku Nicely presented and worded a deserved win for the contest a bit different than others
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Great review zanya
Comment from Bill Schott
This reverse haiku, Riversides Brownish Reeds, presented with a 7-5-7 formatting, captures the tough place keepers that remain where they lived, waiting to live again.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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This reverse haiku, Riversides Brownish Reeds, presented with a 7-5-7 formatting, captures the tough place keepers that remain where they lived, waiting to live again.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Celyn
I do like this poem, which meets the requirements of the reverse haiku competition well. However, I think that it should be 'riverside's' as the reeds belong to the riverside and you are not talking about more than one riverside. Apart from that, this is a beautiful poem so good luck with it
Celyn
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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I do like this poem, which meets the requirements of the reverse haiku competition well. However, I think that it should be 'riverside's' as the reeds belong to the riverside and you are not talking about more than one riverside. Apart from that, this is a beautiful poem so good luck with it
Celyn
Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
One of the best ones. Lovely and rich nature imagery. Good syllables count for the contest. Good rhyme. I love the presentation and imagery. I hope you do well in the contest. This contest is not a haiku but it sounds like a fun project.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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One of the best ones. Lovely and rich nature imagery. Good syllables count for the contest. Good rhyme. I love the presentation and imagery. I hope you do well in the contest. This contest is not a haiku but it sounds like a fun project.
Gypsy
Comment Written 07-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Great review zanya
Comment from Wendy G
Very nice and a little different. Hope and optimism are suggested by nature's cycle of renewal. An excellent poem and I send you very best wishes for the contest. Great image to support your words.
Wendy.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Very nice and a little different. Hope and optimism are suggested by nature's cycle of renewal. An excellent poem and I send you very best wishes for the contest. Great image to support your words.
Wendy.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Great review zanya
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I enjoyed the distinction of the 5 syllable line here by using a visually distinct (aurally identical) rhyme, and the use of colour to move through time. Kate xx
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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I enjoyed the distinction of the 5 syllable line here by using a visually distinct (aurally identical) rhyme, and the use of colour to move through time. Kate xx
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Great review zanya
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The snow freshens up the scene when there is no green, from Autumnal browns to virgin snow before spring brings back some welcome colour, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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The snow freshens up the scene when there is no green, from Autumnal browns to virgin snow before spring brings back some welcome colour, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from prettybluebirds
You have done a superb job with the writing prompt. The words have a lovely flow, and you have a color in each line. The artwork is perfect. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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You have done a superb job with the writing prompt. The words have a lovely flow, and you have a color in each line. The artwork is perfect. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Thanks for that wonderful accolade. Zanya
