Blurry Eye
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Comment from Ricky1024
This is emotionally powerful and draining.
Well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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My Normal and Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned most Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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This is emotionally powerful and draining.
Well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
...
My Normal and Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned most Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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why thxs Ricky for your precise comments. Honorable as always
lulube
Comment from JT traveller
Lovely poem. Almost a lament. I can sense your pain and sadness. Very well expressed. In short, a beautiful piece. Thankyou for sharing your thoughts.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Lovely poem. Almost a lament. I can sense your pain and sadness. Very well expressed. In short, a beautiful piece. Thankyou for sharing your thoughts.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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thxs for your insightful review and Happy New Year
lulube
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Comment from kahpot
I would imagine that this would be quite painful and that the continuous finger in the eye would be necessary, excellent flow and story in this read, very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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I would imagine that this would be quite painful and that the continuous finger in the eye would be necessary, excellent flow and story in this read, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 03-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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lol thxs for your great comments and review and Happy New Year
lulube
