Some Call It Luck
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Some Call It Luck - Chapter 31"A unique friendship affects the course of 2 lives.
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Comment from lancellot
So, Abby can snag a man and go out on a normal date. I suspect we are being shown this because this date is the beginning of something major in Abby's future. Perhaps, a hubby and little ones, after the Masters.
Well written, it is good to a slice of life from her POV.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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So, Abby can snag a man and go out on a normal date. I suspect we are being shown this because this date is the beginning of something major in Abby's future. Perhaps, a hubby and little ones, after the Masters.
Well written, it is good to a slice of life from her POV.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Thank you. Spoiler alert: She doesn't spill anything on her date!
Comment from Rebecca Roberts1
Your dialogue is well done. It flows nicely in conversation.
It's always a good idea to leave the reader hanging at the end to the chapter to see what happens next. You did that.
Good Job.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Your dialogue is well done. It flows nicely in conversation.
It's always a good idea to leave the reader hanging at the end to the chapter to see what happens next. You did that.
Good Job.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Rebecca. Tomorrow we'll really find out how the date went.
Comment from royowen
Yes, EJ was right, let's see how he behaves, if he's anything like the young me, perhaps not so well. This is a great post, full of those things I admire in a writer, putting oneself in the opposite gender's shoes. Beautifully written Jim, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Yes, EJ was right, let's see how he behaves, if he's anything like the young me, perhaps not so well. This is a great post, full of those things I admire in a writer, putting oneself in the opposite gender's shoes. Beautifully written Jim, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Thanks, Roy. I've had to get some help with that from both my wife and daughter to get the female perspective on things. They've been invaluable in this process.
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I?m sure, I lived in a house of females
Comment from jmdg1954
I sense a romance brewing as Kenny said she looked great, while Abby was definitely up front about it:
"Tall and handsome and polite, I guess," I replied with a grin.
This seemed to be a chapter linking what's to come.
Nice read. John
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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I sense a romance brewing as Kenny said she looked great, while Abby was definitely up front about it:
"Tall and handsome and polite, I guess," I replied with a grin.
This seemed to be a chapter linking what's to come.
Nice read. John
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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You're right about that, John. Thanks for the good review and for staying with the story.
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
Well handled but I'm still rooting for EJ! I feel your use of conversation has developed and is showing character in more depth. The suburban setting and the background of the Golf Club are convincing.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Well handled but I'm still rooting for EJ! I feel your use of conversation has developed and is showing character in more depth. The suburban setting and the background of the Golf Club are convincing.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Well, we'll just see if he can compete with the tall, handsome, and polite Kenny!
Thanks for the good review, Sarah and for keeping with the story.
