Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from Sugarray77
You did a great job in constructing this Rhyme Royal, Jim. I would mention that the final letter of the poem is very small and hard to see... messes with the rhyme. I appreciate you explaining the structure of this style in the notes... it is new to me. :)
Melissa
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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You did a great job in constructing this Rhyme Royal, Jim. I would mention that the final letter of the poem is very small and hard to see... messes with the rhyme. I appreciate you explaining the structure of this style in the notes... it is new to me. :)
Melissa
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Melissa, thank you, I corrected that font size. Happy New Year!
Comment from Celyn
This poem has kept well to the structure provided and generally rhymes well. I had to think about your use of 'nigh' but I think that I have got it now as she is almost but not quite alone? The near rhyme of ashamed and fame works too
Celyn
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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This poem has kept well to the structure provided and generally rhymes well. I had to think about your use of 'nigh' but I think that I have got it now as she is almost but not quite alone? The near rhyme of ashamed and fame works too
Celyn
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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yes that is the correct assumption. Thank you!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Irma LaDouche is the first thought I thought when your selected picture appeared. I can't remember the movie, but I think it starred Bob Lemon and Shirley McClain.
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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Irma LaDouche is the first thought I thought when your selected picture appeared. I can't remember the movie, but I think it starred Bob Lemon and Shirley McClain.
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Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2022
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Oh yes! The memory still flickers.
