Comment from Aiona

Excellent

Heh! Yeah.... why *DO* they add "-eth" and "-ith" to everything? And yes, it does make it all sound Auld Englysh, doesn't it? Just by adding those suffyxes..... and changing "i"s to "y"s. I see that on a lot of apartment complexes, where they'll make their name all spiffy like putting "Wylde Glenne" or something like that, on the sign, to make it look like you're staying in some exclusive neighborhood or something, when it's just a standard housing subdivision. Cute poem! And it rhymes!

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023

Thank you for the great review, Aiona. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.

Comment from Mario PIERRE

Excellent

Great piece of poetry!! A satire on a personal flaw, taking a funnier turn at each succeeding verse. This has a very good winning potential!!
Good luck!

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022

Thank you for the great review, Mario. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

A flawless poem about writing when our attempts at perfection fail, laced with just the right amount of humor and mistakes. This is a really fun poem.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022

Thank you for the great review and stars, Ginda. I'm glad you likes this silliness.