The Fight Is Real
Nature is AMAZING!!41 total reviews
Comment from Lordinajamjar
A beautiful Spring poem here Rachel. Invoking beautiful Mother Earth and her children is so uplifting. I am certainly looking forward to the thaw and putting the current bitter cold behind us.
Well done.
John
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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A beautiful Spring poem here Rachel. Invoking beautiful Mother Earth and her children is so uplifting. I am certainly looking forward to the thaw and putting the current bitter cold behind us.
Well done.
John
Comment Written 08-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Yes, here's hoping to that!! xo
Comment from FieryRoseFountains
Rachelle, first of all I would like to apologize for not reviewing your writing sooner. You've reviewed so many of mine, and it is only fair I do the same.
Your poem about nature is sublime. The imagery was astounding.
You took flowers, an inanimate living entity, and made a whole story out of them. A story of resilience, of determination, of what it means to truly triumph against the challenges nature and life throw at us.
Exquisite.
Warmly,
FieryRoseFountains
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Rachelle, first of all I would like to apologize for not reviewing your writing sooner. You've reviewed so many of mine, and it is only fair I do the same.
Your poem about nature is sublime. The imagery was astounding.
You took flowers, an inanimate living entity, and made a whole story out of them. A story of resilience, of determination, of what it means to truly triumph against the challenges nature and life throw at us.
Exquisite.
Warmly,
FieryRoseFountains
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Thank you for this review, too, Fiery Rose Fountains! My husband is probably hoping you refrain from further reviews for fear I'll become insufferable to live with! Xo
Comment from Deniz22
Nice imaginative work and far more interesting than the squabbles between the different weeds in our back yard. I wish you and yours a very Happy New Year.
May your future normally splendid works receive a golden shower of Fan Story stars! God bless you, Dennis
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Nice imaginative work and far more interesting than the squabbles between the different weeds in our back yard. I wish you and yours a very Happy New Year.
May your future normally splendid works receive a golden shower of Fan Story stars! God bless you, Dennis
Comment Written 31-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Wow, Denis; that's, uh, quite the blessing there!
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LOL
Comment from WriterHeather
Beautiful piece! Winter is a cold frigid bitch killing all the beautiful living things with her arrival. Don't worry Spring always comes back with a vengeance! Beautiful fierce flowers always bloom again. Mother nature is kind.
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Beautiful piece! Winter is a cold frigid bitch killing all the beautiful living things with her arrival. Don't worry Spring always comes back with a vengeance! Beautiful fierce flowers always bloom again. Mother nature is kind.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the Contest.
Good rhyme and meter that doesn't sound forced.
Nice presentation. I don't understand the ending. Are you going to destroy the flowers?
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Wonderful entry for the Contest.
Good rhyme and meter that doesn't sound forced.
Nice presentation. I don't understand the ending. Are you going to destroy the flowers?
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Never!
Thanks for the warm and encouraging review!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
And thank God for these flowers and their ability to survive the harshest of winters. You honor nature with this lovely poem. Great rhyming. HAPPY NEW YEAR.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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And thank God for these flowers and their ability to survive the harshest of winters. You honor nature with this lovely poem. Great rhyming. HAPPY NEW YEAR.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Yes! Nature is wonderfully resilient! Thanks for the encouraging review!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, The Fight is Real, focuses on these tight wired flower-shrubs, which take over their assigned piece of earth and create a barrier that conjures poetic thought.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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This poem, The Fight is Real, focuses on these tight wired flower-shrubs, which take over their assigned piece of earth and create a barrier that conjures poetic thought.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Yesss! Thank you for this astute review!
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Beautiful poem, reflecting the excitement of anticipation for warmer days. I like the strong words which drive the point and the solid rhyming pattern.
Well done
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Beautiful poem, reflecting the excitement of anticipation for warmer days. I like the strong words which drive the point and the solid rhyming pattern.
Well done
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Mario, for this warm and supportive review!
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Rachelle,
Nice job on your poem. The picture you chose was perfect and the color scheme for the font was right on. I never realized that the two flowers grew together. We have wild forget-me-nots that grow here in Alaska. Later on in the summer, lupine is everywhere. I'm always amazed how tough these delicate flowers can be, to endure the long winters and brutal storms. Thanks for sharing this gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Hello Rachelle,
Nice job on your poem. The picture you chose was perfect and the color scheme for the font was right on. I never realized that the two flowers grew together. We have wild forget-me-nots that grow here in Alaska. Later on in the summer, lupine is everywhere. I'm always amazed how tough these delicate flowers can be, to endure the long winters and brutal storms. Thanks for sharing this gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Yes, it's absolutely amazing.
Comment from Sally Law
Rachelle, this is a fantastic poem of claiming Spring. Life is in the roots and Spring will always come. We must help the beauty along though by trimming and preparing. We lived in New York near Niagara Falls. How we longed and antipated the arrival of spring! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Rachelle, this is a fantastic poem of claiming Spring. Life is in the roots and Spring will always come. We must help the beauty along though by trimming and preparing. We lived in New York near Niagara Falls. How we longed and antipated the arrival of spring! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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I had no idea you lived so close, Sally!! You know exactly what I'm talking about here!!
