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Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Author,
Your passion poem says so much in just a few words.
Nice photo and graphics.
This is an excellent passion poem.
Good luck.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Author,
Your passion poem says so much in just a few words.
Nice photo and graphics.
This is an excellent passion poem.
Good luck.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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thank you cindy 😎
Comment from John Ciarmello
I love this one! It is entirely accurate and to the point. The photo is super cool and compliments your words and vice versa. I wish you much success with the contest. Best JohnC
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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I love this one! It is entirely accurate and to the point. The photo is super cool and compliments your words and vice versa. I wish you much success with the contest. Best JohnC
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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thank you john 😎
Comment from lavendermoon14
I'm impressed with the beauty of this poem given the short length. It is absolutely gorgeous. I especially love how you used the color red to further highlight passion.I also think that the picture you chose fits very well. Excellent job!
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I'm impressed with the beauty of this poem given the short length. It is absolutely gorgeous. I especially love how you used the color red to further highlight passion.I also think that the picture you chose fits very well. Excellent job!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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thank you rachel 😎
Comment from Mariana Convery
Wow! I realky love it! Says so much in so few words. The active voice in this makes it come alive. Perfected the syllable count. Really great job with this.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Wow! I realky love it! Says so much in so few words. The active voice in this makes it come alive. Perfected the syllable count. Really great job with this.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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thank you mariana 😎
Comment from irishauthorme
You wrote a whole story in just three lines.
Hemingway once said, "Writing is easy. All you have to do is sit in front of the typewriter and bleed."
Often, I find it easier to write the word, rather than say it.
Besides bleeding, when we write and post, we expose ourselves to the criticism of the world.
Good work, and good luck!
irish
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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You wrote a whole story in just three lines.
Hemingway once said, "Writing is easy. All you have to do is sit in front of the typewriter and bleed."
Often, I find it easier to write the word, rather than say it.
Besides bleeding, when we write and post, we expose ourselves to the criticism of the world.
Good work, and good luck!
irish
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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me too!! and you can always go back and edit! thank you irish 😁❤️🖊️💗
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
-good interpretation of a writer's work.
-Excellent poem entry for 3-5-3 Passion writing prompt contest.
-Good syllables count.
-Nice presentation and picture.
-Your descriptive words flow well expressing a clear mental image.
-Good luck in the cont
Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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-good interpretation of a writer's work.
-Excellent poem entry for 3-5-3 Passion writing prompt contest.
-Good syllables count.
-Nice presentation and picture.
-Your descriptive words flow well expressing a clear mental image.
-Good luck in the cont
Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
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thank you gypsy 😎
Comment from estory
I think its a great little piece that speaks about frustration. Nice job in a small space and I think you picked the right words, Passion bleeding, the writer's heart, and unspoken. There's this feeling that you have something to say, but can't get it out. estory
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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I think its a great little piece that speaks about frustration. Nice job in a small space and I think you picked the right words, Passion bleeding, the writer's heart, and unspoken. There's this feeling that you have something to say, but can't get it out. estory
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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lol yea, that's why i write LOL! thank you E 😊👍💗🖊️
Comment from nomi338
Despite a writer's efforts to disguise his thoughts, passions, beliefs and his desires. Much is exposed through words he cannot use to diffuse where he is coming from. Oh, he can try, but truth does not lie.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Despite a writer's efforts to disguise his thoughts, passions, beliefs and his desires. Much is exposed through words he cannot use to diffuse where he is coming from. Oh, he can try, but truth does not lie.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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lol thank you nomi 😎
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You are welcome.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Therefore,
apathy clots
from a selfish heart
with loud words.
....................................................................................................................................................... I had to say something, other than well done.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Therefore,
apathy clots
from a selfish heart
with loud words.
....................................................................................................................................................... I had to say something, other than well done.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
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lol! thank you tom 😎
Comment from Karyn2
An attention grabbing image for this poem! I love this entry for the passion prompt and the way that the poem expresses a writer's heart and soul that flows as they write silent words on a page yet fuelled by so much emotion.
Well thought through!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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An attention grabbing image for this poem! I love this entry for the passion prompt and the way that the poem expresses a writer's heart and soul that flows as they write silent words on a page yet fuelled by so much emotion.
Well thought through!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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thank you karyn 😎
