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Comment from Boogienights
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Wow! This really hits home and resonates with me and how I feel. I'm sure that everyone on this site feels the same, you have truly captured the heart of the writer. Best of luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
    thank you boogie 😎
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

I liked this piece. There's a nice depth to the piece.

It's also nice to see a piece where title, picture and words all add up to the whole so well, without any one element detracting from the other and that the words stand on their own.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
    thank you gmg 😎
Comment from amahra
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This is a wonderful three-five-three Passion poem for your contest entry. The artwork you chose was really nice and reflected the writing well. Best wishes for the contest and Happy New Year!

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
    you too! thank you amahra 😎
Comment from prettybluebirds
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You have done a wonderful job with the writing prompt. Most of the folks on this site do have a passion for writing. The artwork you chose is perfect. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
    thank you bird 😎
Comment from Rickie1
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Haunting, disturbing and real. Nice picture. We bleed our passion through our pencils (key board really but I love writting with pencils) onto paper. The best writting grabs and draws out the emotions of the reader. You made me feel this. Good job. Rickie

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
    thank you rickie 😎
Comment from Lady MJ
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Written words carry enormous meanings. When we are unable to verbally express our emotions or thoughts, writing them down causes the heart and head to collaborate and what's inside pours out.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
    thank you doris 😎
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
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That is one of the best photo and writing match ups that I have seen yet. Powerful and both can be stand alone. Well written .

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
    cool! thank you mm 😎
reply by Moonbeams Musings 55 on 27-Dec-2022
    Thank you, you too.
Comment from Dr. Von
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This is a powerfully written 3-5-3 poem. The strength of the word choices drives home the point of your message. Writing about passion is birthed in the writer's heart waiting to emerge in artistry. Well done.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
    thank you dr von 😎
reply by Dr. Von on 27-Dec-2022
    You are very welcome.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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This is so true. We can release our emotions through our written words that we cannot always verbalise. Lovely blavk and red presentation and you really do show the passion of the writer. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
    thank you pearl 😎
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your contest entry was well presented, Mystery Writer.
I liked the use of the colored fonts, the great picture,
and your meaningful statement.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
    thank you jan 😎