Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from Ricky1024
This chapter for your book "Quiet Lawyer"
Was well written and enjoyed, rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing Sally and enjoy the up and coming New Years Holiday.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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This chapter for your book "Quiet Lawyer"
Was well written and enjoyed, rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing Sally and enjoy the up and coming New Years Holiday.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
It's a good chapter. I reviewed a couple some time ago, and I now have a better picture of the book. While I applaud the perseverance and the painstaking task of writing such an elaborate book, I still find a few phrase construction issues. The repetitive:" as he..., as she..., as they..." tend to impede on the fluidity and rhythm. Maybe you could have an objective look at those parts and edit if you think they can be made better still...
Sincerely,
Mario
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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It's a good chapter. I reviewed a couple some time ago, and I now have a better picture of the book. While I applaud the perseverance and the painstaking task of writing such an elaborate book, I still find a few phrase construction issues. The repetitive:" as he..., as she..., as they..." tend to impede on the fluidity and rhythm. Maybe you could have an objective look at those parts and edit if you think they can be made better still...
Sincerely,
Mario
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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I will keep an eye on the 'as'. Thank you for the reminder.
Comment from Karyn2
Each chapter I read gets me more invested in the characters Barbara! I enjoyed this instalment and Ali and Cord's connection deepening as they ride the emotions of events. Some great things to look forward to in the next instalment to find out what becomes of Griffin and if Ali does return to New York. Best wishes for the New Year!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Each chapter I read gets me more invested in the characters Barbara! I enjoyed this instalment and Ali and Cord's connection deepening as they ride the emotions of events. Some great things to look forward to in the next instalment to find out what becomes of Griffin and if Ali does return to New York. Best wishes for the New Year!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
Ali seems to have ESP. She knew something bad was about to happen. I'm glad Alan is not out on bail any more. He is an indiot to believe he wouldn't be caught. I guess he didn't know about the cameras. The love affair seems to be going along well between Ali and Cord. I think she decide against New York.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Ali seems to have ESP. She knew something bad was about to happen. I'm glad Alan is not out on bail any more. He is an indiot to believe he wouldn't be caught. I guess he didn't know about the cameras. The love affair seems to be going along well between Ali and Cord. I think she decide against New York.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
Ali seems to have ESP. She knew something bad was about to happen. I'm glad Alan is not out on bail any more. He is an indiot to believe he wouldn't be caught. I guess he didn't know about the cameras. The love affair seems to be going along well between Ali and Cord. I think she decide against New York.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Ali seems to have ESP. She knew something bad was about to happen. I'm glad Alan is not out on bail any more. He is an indiot to believe he wouldn't be caught. I guess he didn't know about the cameras. The love affair seems to be going along well between Ali and Cord. I think she decide against New York.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sanku
I hope, and am waiting for it, that by feb 19th you would have solved Cord and Ali's problems.
Another lovely chapter which showcases the good nature of people .Every one at the ranch are so good to Ali that they are not even angry with Ali for bringing Griffin there.
wish you and your family a very happy New Year.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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I hope, and am waiting for it, that by feb 19th you would have solved Cord and Ali's problems.
Another lovely chapter which showcases the good nature of people .Every one at the ranch are so good to Ali that they are not even angry with Ali for bringing Griffin there.
wish you and your family a very happy New Year.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This was an exciting chapter with plenty of action and Griffen doing exactly what Alex feared, he escalated his attack on her by burning the barn of her hosts. Have a blessed new year.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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This was an exciting chapter with plenty of action and Griffen doing exactly what Alex feared, he escalated his attack on her by burning the barn of her hosts. Have a blessed new year.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
He'll, Barbara,
Great new chapter. So you will end the book in February? It must be exciting! I wonder what will happen to Cord and Ali. They make a good couple.
I enjoyed reading your story. It moved along nicely and the plot was easy to understand and follow. Good character development.
Well done, my friend.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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He'll, Barbara,
Great new chapter. So you will end the book in February? It must be exciting! I wonder what will happen to Cord and Ali. They make a good couple.
I enjoyed reading your story. It moved along nicely and the plot was easy to understand and follow. Good character development.
Well done, my friend.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
Glad that you could get this chapter out even with your busy schedule! Thanks for alerting us to the February 19 finale! I know you'll have just the right solution for Cord and Ali to work out their differences and tie the knot as they seem perfect for each other. And I guessed the fire was done by Griffin. It's good they had the surveillance camera.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Glad that you could get this chapter out even with your busy schedule! Thanks for alerting us to the February 19 finale! I know you'll have just the right solution for Cord and Ali to work out their differences and tie the knot as they seem perfect for each other. And I guessed the fire was done by Griffin. It's good they had the surveillance camera.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I would have done the same thing Ali did - helped out in a time of crisis. She'll heal, the horses might have died.
Argh! I wish these two lovebirds would just get on with loving each other - emotionally and physically!
Another well-paced chapter that allows the dialogue to tell the story.
There were a couple of grammatical nits, but I was so into the story that I didn't bother making notes.
Hope you had a wonderful holiday and will enjoy a very happy, healthy, and successful new year.
Pam
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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I would have done the same thing Ali did - helped out in a time of crisis. She'll heal, the horses might have died.
Argh! I wish these two lovebirds would just get on with loving each other - emotionally and physically!
Another well-paced chapter that allows the dialogue to tell the story.
There were a couple of grammatical nits, but I was so into the story that I didn't bother making notes.
Hope you had a wonderful holiday and will enjoy a very happy, healthy, and successful new year.
Pam
Comment Written 26-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
