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Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Good artwork and presentation, Debi.
-You notes are appreciated, and good for you!!
-You wrote a good limerick with effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good opening lines establish the premise.
-A good follow up line that links the lines together.
-Very good concluding lines.
-A good entry; good luck!
-Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, too!!!

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
    Pam, I thank you so much for your very kind review for my limerick, and I appreciate all your sweet words. I think I may have already told you, but worth saying again, Merry Christmas to you and yours! Thanks again my dear friend
reply by Pam (respa) on 22-Dec-2022
    You are very welcome, Debi, and we can't say positive words enough these days. Merry Christmas to you and yours, too.
Comment from John Ciarmello
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I love the artwork here, Debi. Your poem indicates a new beginning for 2023, and it does sound boring, lol. Smoking is a must to give up, but maybe rich foods in moderation? LOL. Loved it! Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
    Hi John, I thank you so much for your very kind review for my limerick, and I appreciate all your awesome words. I think I may have already told you, but worth saying again, Merry Christmas to you and yours! Thanks again my dear friend
Comment from Faith Williams
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Your limerick made me laugh! It's so true bout New Year's though I prefer to call them 'goals'. Something to work towards than against, I suppose. A 'boring' year might not be a bad thing. The last few have been rather event-filled. Merry Christmas, Debi, and may all your 2023 resolutions be kept!

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
    Hi Faith, I think you might be right that a boring one wouldn't be so bad.
    I thank you so much for your very kind review for my limerick, and I appreciate all your thoughtful words. I think I may have already told you, but worth saying again, Merry Christmas to you and yours! Thanks again my dear friend!
Comment from Sanku
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I never make one .Because I will never stick to it .Your limerick was fun .I liked the Cartoon also .
have a great Christmas and a happy New Year with your family.Hugs

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
    Hi Santha, you may be one of the smartest people in the world. It took me sixteen years of trying and never making it stick. Until 2020, who knew the pandemic was coming? I doubt I'd still be smoke free if I knew, but I made a promise to myself and still fighting the good fight. I thank you so much for your very kind review for my limerick, and I appreciate all your thoughtful words. I think I may have already told you, but worth saying again, Merry Christmas to you and yours! Thanks again my dear friend!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Don't tell him!
Don't tell him!
Don't tell him!
Don't tell him!
I'd rather die than give that up!!!!!!!
Well done and best wishes.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
    Hahahaha! You are a riot Wayne! I think you have deemed me speechless! Which I hear is a Christmas miracle in itself! And they said it couldn't be done. Merry Christmas my awesome friend!
reply by Wayne Fowler on 22-Dec-2022
    smiley face here
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
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Debi, hi,
I like your limerick; it reminds me of resolutions I have to make. I hope 2023 is not another lackluster year for me.

Nice rhyme.
Good luck, Debi.
Blessings,
Cindy

I hope you're doing a lot better!ð???


 Comment Written 21-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
    Hi Cindy, you are just a sweetheart and I just love you so much! I thank you so much for your very kind review for my limerick, and I appreciate all your thoughtful words. I think I may have already told you, but worth saying again, Merry Christmas to you and yours! Thanks again my dear friend!
reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 22-Dec-2022
    Merry Christmas, Debi.
    Hugs, love, and blessings,
    Cindy
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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Giving up old habits can prove to be challenging, but we adjust and can replace the bad habits with good ones.

Cute holiday limerick - good luck with the contest and I wish you a very healthy and happy new year!

Pam

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
    Hi Pam, so did your son tell you about the mess that we are getting here? Here we have 16 inches of fresh snow and the wind is supposed to pick up to 60th and another white out where we won't travel. At least where we are in with minus 20 temps without windchill. However, Sally says you guys are going to get below freezing temps. That is some big stuff for you too. You might as well just move here. Lol. Thanks but no thanks right?

    I thank you so much for your very kind review for my limerick, and I appreciate all your thoughtful words. I think I may have already told you, but worth saying again, Merry Christmas to you and yours! Thanks again my dear friend and so glad I found my birthdate twin in such an already good friend. Have a great one!!!
reply by Pam Lonsdale on 22-Dec-2022
    My son loves winters in Minnesota. We think he's nuts!

    Stay safe and warm and have a very merry Christmas!

    xxoo
    Pam the twin:-)
Comment from Ricky1024
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As boring as life can sometimes be we have to remember the new year is approaching and it's a time for New Year Revelations refilling our bucket list.
The last for me personally I don't need made one.
And, forgot it already?
Oh Wait...
Dponge Bob to run against Biden for President in the 2024 Presidential election.
One year ahead?
Oh well the World is going to Hell in a Hand basket!!
Good luck with your Contest Entry and have a Blessed week and Christmas.
Doctor Ricky1024

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
    Hahahaha, Ricky, I am with you 100% on the Biden thing. And add one more thing, I wish that he would have to admit to the world that he was in on Hunter's dirty dealings and everything with getting that one guy fired, (sorry can't think of the name) and also crooked dealings in China.
    I thank you so much for your very kind review for my limerick, and I appreciate all your thoughtful words. I think I may have already told you, but worth saying again, Merry Christmas to you and yours! Thanks again my dear friend!
Comment from Marienkiefer
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Well, Debi, definitely not a boring poem. Rather distinct and delightful.

-Writer gets a playful mood going and sets the tone for all the build up and hype to Christmas, that seems to be a letdown...Unless...One digs in their heels, loads up on snacks and hunkerdown for whatever comes our way.
Lovely philosophy to: take everything in stride, with an added grain of salt. Loved it. Happy Holidays and all the best for 2023.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
    Oh Marien, you are such a delight. I thank you so much for your very kind review for my limerick, and I appreciate all your sweet words. I think I may have already told you, but worth saying again, Merry Christmas to you and yours! Thanks again my dear friend!
reply by Marienkiefer on 22-Dec-2022
    My pleasure, dearest, Debi. All the best.
    Marienkiefer 🌸🌸
Comment from amahra
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I love your artwork; it was so appropriate for the humor of the poem. I loved the poem for its truthfulness as well as its humor. Best wishes in the contest. Great job!

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
    HI Amahra, you are so darn sweet and I just want you to know what a delight it has been to get to know you and become friends. I thank you so much for your very kind review for my limerick, and I appreciate all your sweet words. I think I may have already told you, but worth saying again, Merry Christmas to you and yours! Thanks again my dear friend!