Death By Murder
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Death By Murder - Chap 27"A jewel heist, rival gangs and a cold case.
18 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
"You, my friend, are a bad influence." It's seems to me like I might have heard this say to me more than a few times. And it does seem to be because of wild hare ideas. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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"You, my friend, are a bad influence." It's seems to me like I might have heard this say to me more than a few times. And it does seem to be because of wild hare ideas. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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You a bad influence...Never! Well, they do say not to ever say Never and maybe that applies in your situation. Regardless... I love it all!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
I think most of us would be blown away if we discovered a bullet riddled vehicle with toe bodies in it, and Wyatt is justifiably anxious about it, sharing with his colleague Terry. Hank and Emmy are involved in the same objective, but in a different way. Beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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I think most of us would be blown away if we discovered a bullet riddled vehicle with toe bodies in it, and Wyatt is justifiably anxious about it, sharing with his colleague Terry. Hank and Emmy are involved in the same objective, but in a different way. Beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your support and all your kindness...
Happy New Year, Roy
Hugs, Carol
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A pleasure Carol
Comment from karenina
Man. I'm beginning to think diamonds aren't anyone's best friend! I can not wait until all these separate entities start crossing paths...
I know how great you are at taking 37 pieces of yarn and making them into one perfect bow!
Hey--thanks for the Hank and Emmy "fix"-
I'm sweet on them like Hank's sweet on pastry!
Karenina
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Man. I'm beginning to think diamonds aren't anyone's best friend! I can not wait until all these separate entities start crossing paths...
I know how great you are at taking 37 pieces of yarn and making them into one perfect bow!
Hey--thanks for the Hank and Emmy "fix"-
I'm sweet on them like Hank's sweet on pastry!
Karenina
Comment Written 19-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Good morning
Thanks for enjoying the story as always and making me smile as well. I hope to work in a few sweeter moments for the two besides Hank's love for pastries. I'm enjoying adding the more intimate moments to the crime story and I think everyone likes it as well.
Hope all is well....
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Love ya, Carol
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You always seem to find the right balance, allowing us to immerse ourselves in the crime(s) while also gifting us a bit of romance.
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I hope I can continue to keep you and the other readers on the edge of their seats as I muddle through the crime scenes and wash it down with the sweet liquor of love. Hugs, Carol
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I have not a doubt in the world!
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Chapter 28 awaits when you have time
Smiles and hugs
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I'm ahead of you! My review for Ch. 28 is posted!
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Of course, you are! LOL
I don't know how I am sitting at this computer, but the distraction is far better than lying in that bed watching old Hallmark movies. Besides, I so love chatting with you.
Hugs, Carol
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Writing, for you, is like another layer of antibiotics! It gets those goid endorphins pumping! (Although Hallmark Christmas movies are also good for your health!)
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I love the Hallmark though I've seen most of them... I tend to get emotional and go through a ton of Kleenex. That's why I watch from my bedroom ...alone! Yes, writing is what drives me and lifts my spirits.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Packed with action, and multiple crimes happening because of the jewel heist, and resultant widespread greed. Crispy and her dog will be in danger now, as also Sandy. Hank and Emmy - a good working team. Surely they'll link up with Garth soon too.
Wendy
Typo: Lest you forget (not "least")
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Packed with action, and multiple crimes happening because of the jewel heist, and resultant widespread greed. Crispy and her dog will be in danger now, as also Sandy. Hank and Emmy - a good working team. Surely they'll link up with Garth soon too.
Wendy
Typo: Lest you forget (not "least")
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Error fixed and appreciated!
I'm hoping Crissy doesn't let her inquisitive nose for a story get her in too deep before she speaks to Garth again. Thanks for following along on this wild journey.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
I most enjoyed the dialogue between Deputy Wyatt and Police officer Terry. Wyatt knows he could lose his job, and Terry knows he could lose his bonus from Costello if he can't prevent legal authorities from destroying Costello's chances to acquire the jewels. Unfortunately, Crissy is going to stick her nose where it can get shot off. See you in the next chapter.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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I most enjoyed the dialogue between Deputy Wyatt and Police officer Terry. Wyatt knows he could lose his job, and Terry knows he could lose his bonus from Costello if he can't prevent legal authorities from destroying Costello's chances to acquire the jewels. Unfortunately, Crissy is going to stick her nose where it can get shot off. See you in the next chapter.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Good morning, Lorraine
I too hope that Crissy thinks twice before following the story without back up from Garth... but????
The deputy and Boston's officer are in a pickle and there's no way this can have a good outcome for them. They are caught between right and wrong without an escape hatch.
Glad you are still enjoying and I appreciate your comments.
Smiles Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is an exciting story with a lot of people involved doing their own thing rather too often. The girl with the dog seems likely to either get herself killed or make life difficult for the bad guys. Well-written and proofreading is well-done.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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This is an exciting story with a lot of people involved doing their own thing rather too often. The girl with the dog seems likely to either get herself killed or make life difficult for the bad guys. Well-written and proofreading is well-done.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Good day, Carol
Thanks for the kind review and your interest in my story. Yes, it appears there is trouble on the horizon for so many. Your kindness is appreciated.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lancellot
Seems like Hank is about to make a mistake. Always, get the chief's okay before going to another jurisdiction.
Will, Terry find her and her dog from that little to go on? Maybe. Wyatt sucks as cop and I sense he is dead weight that will have to be delt with.
Solid writing.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Seems like Hank is about to make a mistake. Always, get the chief's okay before going to another jurisdiction.
Will, Terry find her and her dog from that little to go on? Maybe. Wyatt sucks as cop and I sense he is dead weight that will have to be delt with.
Solid writing.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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I agree...Hank had more freedom in Gulf Shores and doesn't take his new boss into consideration before he follows his bloodhound nose for crime. It could very well get him into hot water.
Terry has found himself in over his head and rather than tell Costello, he thinks he can fix it all himself. Trouble looms on the horizon there.
I am beyond thrilled by reaction to the story and am grateful for your thoughts and shiny stars. Please continue to set me straight if I stray from the path and continue to enjoy the story.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Two days for Hank and Emmy to build their relationship, as well as to investigate the current case. Lots of time for clues to show up also. Enjoying the dialogue between them.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Two days for Hank and Emmy to build their relationship, as well as to investigate the current case. Lots of time for clues to show up also. Enjoying the dialogue between them.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Good morning, Carol
I love to dish out a good murder and then add a case of romance for dessert. Glad you are continuing to enjoy the story. Thank you.
Smiles, Carol
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Seems to be your specialty dish! Lol.
Comment from lyenochka
Yay, Emmy and Hank are going on a road trip! They might even meet Garth went they follow the trail. I hope our our courageous bartender, Sandy, will be safe! First Costello, and then a cop working for Costello.
Punctuation suggestions:
"Your - it's just some car thieves, Wyatt - (single quotes instead of hyphens) otherwise, it's confusing as to why Wyatt is talking to himself.
'Just stay calm (double quotes)
"Least you forget, (Lest)
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Yay, Emmy and Hank are going on a road trip! They might even meet Garth went they follow the trail. I hope our our courageous bartender, Sandy, will be safe! First Costello, and then a cop working for Costello.
Punctuation suggestions:
"Your - it's just some car thieves, Wyatt - (single quotes instead of hyphens) otherwise, it's confusing as to why Wyatt is talking to himself.
'Just stay calm (double quotes)
"Least you forget, (Lest)
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Good morning, Helen
That's what I get for second guessing myself...mistakes. I had it right, someone questioned me, and of course, I changed it instantly. Thank you for pointing everything out. I appreciate it very much.
As for the stars, your kindness always overwhelms me and leaves me feeling good inside. I am so lucky to have friends like you that have reconfirmed my abilities and left me smiling once again.
Hugs, Carol
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Carol, this is a great continuation. The police seems to be in a bit of fangle. I wonder what will happen there. And now we see that Emmy is quite taken with Hank, so she'll go on the road trip with him. Great story. All best, Ulla :)))
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Hi Carol, this is a great continuation. The police seems to be in a bit of fangle. I wonder what will happen there. And now we see that Emmy is quite taken with Hank, so she'll go on the road trip with him. Great story. All best, Ulla :)))
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Yes, the police have gotten in over their head... falling in "bed" with criminals and Emmy is being drawn closer to her new partner, Hank. I love deciding how their budding romance will bloom.
Thanks so much - Carol
