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Do good and feel good poems

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Comment from Ricky1024
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This is a Nonet Poem Contest Entry rich in Theme and Imagery.
About our Loving Saviour and this up and coming Christmas Holiday.
Rich in Theme and Imagery it also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your contest Entry and have a blessed Christmas.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
    I thank you so much Ricky for your very kind review for my nonet.
    I appreciate all your thoughtful words. Merry Christmas to you and yours!
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Yes, the nonet form is a pretty simple format, as the contest instructions claim, but it doesn't mean it is easy to create a lovely one -- you have done so, and your presentation is flawless too.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2022
    Dawn, you are so darn sweet and I appreciate you and your lovely comments so very much! God Bless you & yours, this Christmas! And have the best and Merriest yet! Love, Debi
reply by Dawn Munro on 22-Dec-2022
    God bless you and yours too, Debi. You're very welcome. :)
Comment from John Ciarmello
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Hi, Debi! Beautifully written! We always tend to lift our voices higher when we are enchanted with the holiday season. You're right we need to raise our voices beyond special times of the year. I love CĂ©line Dion's Silent Night! Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2022
    Hi and thank you John! As always it is so nice to hear from you! Thank you very much for your lovely review, and comments, my friend. I wish you and yours the most Blessed Christmas ever!!
Comment from mermaids
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This is the first Christian poem I have read in nonet form. Your words are smooth and the theme of faith comes through clearly. "Feel healing rays" is a great line that brings forth a sense of God's presence.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2022
    Hi and thank you! As always it is so nice to hear from you! Thank you very much for your lovely review, and comments, my friend. I wish you and yours the most Blessed Christmas ever!!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. It didn't come into my PM box. I'm glad I was searching for something to read and found it. This is very well written.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2022
    Hi Barb, as always it is so nice to hear from you! Thank you very much for your lovely review, and comments, my friend. I wish you and yours the most Blessed Christmas ever!!
Comment from Regina Elliott
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Hello dear Debi, This is such
an exquisite and loving
Christmas poem for our
Savior born in that little
stable. Your great love for
Him shines through. I hope
you and your family and
friends have a wondrous and
bright sparkling Christmas!

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2022
    Hi Regina, as always it is so nice to hear from you! Thank you very much for your lovely comments, and the gift of those beautiful Christmas stars. How did you know that is what I always wanted?? LOL. Seriously tho, I do appreciate you and becoming so close this past year. I wish you and yours the most Blessed Christmas ever!!
Comment from Boogienights
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Absolutely beautiful and so true. God and His son are celebrated during the Christmas season, but truly they are always with us and deserving of our praise. Your poem is formatted well and looks awesome. Thanks for sharing. :)

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2022
    Hi Sharon, as always it is so nice to hear from you! Thank you very much for your lovely review, and comments, my friend. Not being nosy with you, but is there someone who is living with you; like a husband, older son, etc.. I am asking because our weather is going to turn into the storm of a century and I know it is hard enough with your knees to get around too. I just worry about you if you don't have someone. We may have to cancel Christmas with my family if it gets as bad Saturday night as they say it might. I hope not tho.
    I wish you and yours the most Blessed Christmas ever!!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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And God appreciates his followers declaring what He taught. Would do the world much good if they could discover His light, and then pass it on to another like you have,

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2022
    Hi Tom, as always it is so nice to hear from you! Thank you very much for your lovely review, and comments, my dear friend. I think I like the way you said it better. Lol! So thankful we met and became such great friends this year, and I wish you and yours the most Blessed Christmas ever!!
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
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I so wish I had a six for you so we can make it a virtual 6.I love the way you wrote it from big to little and the last word being the best God bless you and your family on these holidays

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2022
    Hi Abby, as always it is so nice to hear from you again! I appreciate the virtual six just as much as the real one. It truly is the thought that counts. Thank you very much for your lovely review, and comments, my friend. I wish you and yours the most Blessed Christmas ever!! Debi









Comment from jake cosmos aller
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nicely done Christmas nonet capturing the mood of the holiday and what it means and why we celebrate the day whether we are a believer or not, Christmas is special

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2022
    Hello Jake, as always it is so nice to hear from you! Thank you very much for your awesome review, and for your lovely comments, my friend. I wish you and yours the most Blessed Christmas ever!!