Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 94 "Too many spirits"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
i love what you have written here hope I could have given you a six but all out of the sixes. Great way of a display of character in your write keep it up you'll do well in the rankings
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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i love what you have written here hope I could have given you a six but all out of the sixes. Great way of a display of character in your write keep it up you'll do well in the rankings
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Thanks Abby
Comment from Aussie
Couldn't have said it better. If you drink, don't drive. I have never understood why people have to get tanked to enjoy a party. Alcohol is poison to our system, it lifts you up, gone are your inhibition's, making a fool of yourself with a mighty headache.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Couldn't have said it better. If you drink, don't drive. I have never understood why people have to get tanked to enjoy a party. Alcohol is poison to our system, it lifts you up, gone are your inhibition's, making a fool of yourself with a mighty headache.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Never been truer words state, thanks for the validation have an awesome Week before Christmas.
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Happy Christmas JLR!
Comment from Gloria ....
I think you have done a fine job with this, J. I'm not sure I completely understand the form but your wit shine through, and the repeating rhyme has caused some interesting word choices.
Very well done, indeed.
Gloria
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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I think you have done a fine job with this, J. I'm not sure I completely understand the form but your wit shine through, and the repeating rhyme has caused some interesting word choices.
Very well done, indeed.
Gloria
Comment Written 17-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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How kind of you Gloria! This formulaic poem was quite the challenge for certain. But I loosen up and had fun with it. Have an awesome week building up to Christmas.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Thanks for sharing this humorous poem. At first, I thought you did the poem in the picture and was impressed with your formatting abilities. I liked all your rhymes and fun scenario. After 2021's lockdowns, we are all anxious to get out and socialize more.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Lol. Thanks for sharing this humorous poem. At first, I thought you did the poem in the picture and was impressed with your formatting abilities. I liked all your rhymes and fun scenario. After 2021's lockdowns, we are all anxious to get out and socialize more.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Smiles For certain!
Comment from LJbutterfly
This was my first encounter with a Raccontino poetry form, and it was quite enjoyable and fun to read. I read it straight through the first time, then went back and read the rhyming lines the second time, and the other lines the third time. This poem required real thought. You did a spectacular job. Plus, it's humorous.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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This was my first encounter with a Raccontino poetry form, and it was quite enjoyable and fun to read. I read it straight through the first time, then went back and read the rhyming lines the second time, and the other lines the third time. This poem required real thought. You did a spectacular job. Plus, it's humorous.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Very funny. Could see this being a skit on a British comedy show. Very festive and tongue in cheek naughty. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for posting and Merry Christmas.
Gretchen
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Very funny. Could see this being a skit on a British comedy show. Very festive and tongue in cheek naughty. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for posting and Merry Christmas.
Gretchen
Comment Written 17-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
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Gretchen, thank you! Merriest of Christmas celebrations to you as well!
Comment from Boogienights
Hahaha...it's the season I think. Nothing wrong with a little bit of partying, as long as you're able to function the next day. :) I love this humorous poem, thanks for the smile..:)
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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Hahaha...it's the season I think. Nothing wrong with a little bit of partying, as long as you're able to function the next day. :) I love this humorous poem, thanks for the smile..:)
Comment Written 17-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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Smiles back at you!😉😉😉
Comment from royowen
I loved the naughty ending to this fabulous poem my friend, you've managed to make a very good ending to this great raccontino you've woven a great tale with the "unrhymed" second lines of the poem, which I think makes the poem flow better, great job Jim. Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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I loved the naughty ending to this fabulous poem my friend, you've managed to make a very good ending to this great raccontino you've woven a great tale with the "unrhymed" second lines of the poem, which I think makes the poem flow better, great job Jim. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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Thank you dear friend! be well!
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You too Jim
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You might want to change the title to: (Too many spirits) as it is not grammatically correct as it is. Oh dear, too much partying has resulted in embarrassment here, a fun post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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You might want to change the title to: (Too many spirits) as it is not grammatically correct as it is. Oh dear, too much partying has resulted in embarrassment here, a fun post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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Thanks much!
Comment from Lilly Flowers
There is quite a lot of complexity that went into this form and I commend you for taking on the challenge. I hope the protagonist learned his lesson. Partying and then going to church the next day were not the wisest of choices, haha. Hugs, Lilly
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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There is quite a lot of complexity that went into this form and I commend you for taking on the challenge. I hope the protagonist learned his lesson. Partying and then going to church the next day were not the wisest of choices, haha. Hugs, Lilly
Comment Written 17-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
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Smiles and hugs back
