Novella - Unwanted Dog
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Unwanted Dog-21"Adopted By Unknown Stranger In Wal-Mart Parking Lo
15 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I think everyone should read your story. I have never heard such unpleasantness ever in an orphaned school. And to think no one stood up for you is beyond anyone's imagination.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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I think everyone should read your story. I have never heard such unpleasantness ever in an orphaned school. And to think no one stood up for you is beyond anyone's imagination.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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It was what it was - not very good.
Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Ulla
Well, Brett, it's pretty obvious that you don't much care for Walmart. I have been into many and they all look alike, I'll grant you that.
So now I'm looking forward to see where this is going. I have an idea, but I'm not saying. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2022
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Well, Brett, it's pretty obvious that you don't much care for Walmart. I have been into many and they all look alike, I'll grant you that.
So now I'm looking forward to see where this is going. I have an idea, but I'm not saying. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 17-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I liked how you described scoping out your patsy. I guess this was before the cardboard sign that read will work for food. Very good view of the fight for survival. Trust no one. Great installment. I really enjoyed. Gretchen
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2022
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I liked how you described scoping out your patsy. I guess this was before the cardboard sign that read will work for food. Very good view of the fight for survival. Trust no one. Great installment. I really enjoyed. Gretchen
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can't wait to see who your bullseye was. My third son, Andrew swears Walmart is a social experiment to see how long perfectly normal humans can be there before they turn into raving maniacs. He may be onto something.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2022
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I can't wait to see who your bullseye was. My third son, Andrew swears Walmart is a social experiment to see how long perfectly normal humans can be there before they turn into raving maniacs. He may be onto something.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
". . .a mid-twenties mother with twin terrorizers still riding in the cart." Yes, sir, this sentence uses few words to make an unforgettable description. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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". . .a mid-twenties mother with twin terrorizers still riding in the cart." Yes, sir, this sentence uses few words to make an unforgettable description. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2022
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Although I always appreciate your reviews did hold off on responding to this one until after today's oncology appointment. NO NEW TUMORS! The best news I could have gotten. Does not mean I can not still develop them, but for today, no new ones. Makes my birthday and Christmas all I could ask for.
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Thanks for the wonderful information, Brett. I'm so happy for you, and it gives me something else to celebrate. Happy Birthday! and Merry Christmas!
Comment from Shirley McLain
I actually despise Walmart, and my husband thinks there is no other store. Sadly, WM has caused a loss that will never return. You did a great job, and I'm ready for the next chapter. Enjoy your day. Shirley
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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I actually despise Walmart, and my husband thinks there is no other store. Sadly, WM has caused a loss that will never return. You did a great job, and I'm ready for the next chapter. Enjoy your day. Shirley
Comment Written 14-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Wendy G
Did I miss a chapter? I don't remember how you got out of that House of Horrors. Neverthless, I enjoyed this chapter, and you described Walmart so well that even though I am not American I could visualize it perfectly, as seen through the eyes of the desperate boy. Looking forward to more.
Wendy
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Did I miss a chapter? I don't remember how you got out of that House of Horrors. Neverthless, I enjoyed this chapter, and you described Walmart so well that even though I am not American I could visualize it perfectly, as seen through the eyes of the desperate boy. Looking forward to more.
Wendy
Comment Written 14-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from T B Botts
So, Brett,
I gather you don't much care for Wal-Mart. I used to see the videos of the weirdos that hung around the aisles and it kind of freaked me out. When I moved to Wasilla though, and there was a Wal-Mart, I was pleased to see that most of the strange characters are elsewhere. I'm personally delighted to have them here. When I was fishing down in Hoonah this year, milk was $7.50 a half gallon, coffee was $22.00 for a can of Folgers, Kelloggs corn flakes was between $11.00 and $13.00 and a can of Campbells tomato soup was over $3.00. It was nice to go somewhere that has decent prices and a selection to boot. Interesting chapter, but I'm curious how you got out. I imagine anyway you could accomplish it would be great.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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So, Brett,
I gather you don't much care for Wal-Mart. I used to see the videos of the weirdos that hung around the aisles and it kind of freaked me out. When I moved to Wasilla though, and there was a Wal-Mart, I was pleased to see that most of the strange characters are elsewhere. I'm personally delighted to have them here. When I was fishing down in Hoonah this year, milk was $7.50 a half gallon, coffee was $22.00 for a can of Folgers, Kelloggs corn flakes was between $11.00 and $13.00 and a can of Campbells tomato soup was over $3.00. It was nice to go somewhere that has decent prices and a selection to boot. Interesting chapter, but I'm curious how you got out. I imagine anyway you could accomplish it would be great.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Appreciate your insights about your Wally World experiences and the review.
Comment from BethShelby
I do believe if you'd had to spend anymore time at the place you've have likely turned into a career criminal and maybe be serviing a life sentence by now..It does sound as if this place was doing much to turn kids in a better direction.
I glad you spared the granny. I'm wondering if you new target turns out to be the guy who adopted you. You didn't explain how you managed to escape again so soon. I would have thought they'd be watching you closer.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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I do believe if you'd had to spend anymore time at the place you've have likely turned into a career criminal and maybe be serviing a life sentence by now..It does sound as if this place was doing much to turn kids in a better direction.
I glad you spared the granny. I'm wondering if you new target turns out to be the guy who adopted you. You didn't explain how you managed to escape again so soon. I would have thought they'd be watching you closer.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2022
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Appreciate your insightful comments and the review.
Comment from Sankey
Another good chapter on YOU! Sorry SIXES all gone for now. You lay it all out there for us as to how you planned to get by out side Hermitage Hall. Keep it coming.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Another good chapter on YOU! Sorry SIXES all gone for now. You lay it all out there for us as to how you planned to get by out side Hermitage Hall. Keep it coming.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2022
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Hope all is well in your world these days. Waiting until the 21st, the next day I go see my Oncologist. Only Christmas present I want this year is no new tumors. Will let you know.
