~ The Bonus To Share ~
A beautiful Christmas Bonus....11 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, A Bonus to Share, has it all. The joy of the season is magnified by family who also understand the immensity of Jesus' birth.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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This poem, A Bonus to Share, has it all. The joy of the season is magnified by family who also understand the immensity of Jesus' birth.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2022
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I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem. It's true....the most beautiful part of the season and always is truly Jesus!! Thank you for the wonderful comment and review my friend....Merry Christmas
Heidixoxo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A faithful and sincere write about the true meaning of Christmas and how you will celebrate the day and too much important is put on the material gifts given at Christmas, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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A faithful and sincere write about the true meaning of Christmas and how you will celebrate the day and too much important is put on the material gifts given at Christmas, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Dolly you're just the absolute sweetest!! I smile every single time I see your name. Thank you so much my friend....
Heidixoxo
Comment from Wendy G
That is a very meaningful poem, written from the heart and focussing on the real meaning of the season. Best wishes for your contest entry - and for a happy and holy Christmas.
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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That is a very meaningful poem, written from the heart and focussing on the real meaning of the season. Best wishes for your contest entry - and for a happy and holy Christmas.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Hi Wendy,
Thank you for such a wonderful comment and review. I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem. I appreciate you....
Heidixoxo
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
He's definitely the greatest bonus we can ever love and appreciate. Like your poem. It is very warm and kind. Jesus is a man that is forever loved and one day He will make His appearance known.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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He's definitely the greatest bonus we can ever love and appreciate. Like your poem. It is very warm and kind. Jesus is a man that is forever loved and one day He will make His appearance known.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Thank you so very much for the great and kind review. I truly appreciate you....
Heidixoxo
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
A beautiful concept for a Christmas bonus! The true bonus lies in the birth of the Christ child and His promise of salvation The poem's rhyming scheme is a little forced in places.
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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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A beautiful concept for a Christmas bonus! The true bonus lies in the birth of the Christ child and His promise of salvation The poem's rhyming scheme is a little forced in places.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for your honesty. I appreciate that
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written post my friend, celebrating the season with this neatly scribed poetic praise of the most high God who sent His only Son to rescue the lost, of which I was the most lost. An excellent post, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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A beautifully written post my friend, celebrating the season with this neatly scribed poetic praise of the most high God who sent His only Son to rescue the lost, of which I was the most lost. An excellent post, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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Hi Roy,
Thank you so very much for the beautiful review. You made my day. By the way...we've all been lost before but hopefully found now.
Heidixoxo
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Comment from Terry Broxson
You have written a lovely poem for this contest. Good luck. The true meaning of Christmas is nicely expressed by your faith. Please look in your messages for a Christmas Bonus. Thank you for entering. Merry Christmas, Terry.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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You have written a lovely poem for this contest. Good luck. The true meaning of Christmas is nicely expressed by your faith. Please look in your messages for a Christmas Bonus. Thank you for entering. Merry Christmas, Terry.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much Terry for the amazing review. You just gave me the best gift ever....a smile!! Merry Christmas
Heidixoxo
Comment from Jay Squires
Well, as your poem indicates, you've dedicated yourself to the true meaning of Christmas for a Christian. It can be sad when loved ones can't be physically present on such an important occasion. With your Spiritual Focus, however, you won't be, alone on Christmas. Blessings to you and all your loved ones.
Jay
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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Well, as your poem indicates, you've dedicated yourself to the true meaning of Christmas for a Christian. It can be sad when loved ones can't be physically present on such an important occasion. With your Spiritual Focus, however, you won't be, alone on Christmas. Blessings to you and all your loved ones.
Jay
Comment Written 09-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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Hi Jay,
Thank you so very much for the wonderful reply. You gave me a much needed smile tonight. Im happy you enjoyed my piece . I look forward to reading your work as well.
Best Wishes,
Heidixoxo
Comment from Teri7
Heidi, This is just a very beautiful and well written poem about the true Christmas bonus. Our Lord, Jesus Christ. You used very good descriptive words. Love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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Heidi, This is just a very beautiful and well written poem about the true Christmas bonus. Our Lord, Jesus Christ. You used very good descriptive words. Love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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Hi Teri,
My heart is full knowing you enjoyed my poem. I appreciate the honest and wonderful message from you as well.
Best Wishes,
Heidixoxo
Comment from jmdg1954
A few of the other entries I read had the obvious bonus choice circling around monetary values.
Yours went in a completely opposite direction.
Your journey took us from time and family as a great journey to enjoy to our Lord as the utmost bonus.
Nicely done and best of luck in the contest.
Cheers, John
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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A few of the other entries I read had the obvious bonus choice circling around monetary values.
Yours went in a completely opposite direction.
Your journey took us from time and family as a great journey to enjoy to our Lord as the utmost bonus.
Nicely done and best of luck in the contest.
Cheers, John
Comment Written 09-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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Hi John,
I'm so happy you enjoyed my entry. Thank you for the wonderful compliments as well....it means a lot.
Heidixoxo
