So No Monster Won't Git Me.
Lord Please Sleep Here Wit Me...5 total reviews
Comment from Larry Ingle
It sorta took this 72 year old man here back to the good old days in the 50's and 60's when the "I lay me down to sleep prayer"s were common for children. I have a few children's books that I'd like to share with children here at: amazon.com/author/lgingleshortstoryrhymes
I appreciate your sharing. I enjoyed reading your writing here. Great Job!
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It sorta took this 72 year old man here back to the good old days in the 50's and 60's when the "I lay me down to sleep prayer"s were common for children. I have a few children's books that I'd like to share with children here at: amazon.com/author/lgingleshortstoryrhymes
I appreciate your sharing. I enjoyed reading your writing here. Great Job!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet!
You have your first vote!
I like your creative approach in this contest.
Yes kids have vivid imagination and often that imagination can play nasty tricks.
A branch scratching on the glass window can seem like nails of a monster , the wind howling like a werewolf, shadows on the wall , creeping floors demons come to haunt the list is long.
All monsters created in their minds but still capable to scare a child , make them tremble.
I like the idea of praying to the Lord for protection.
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Ciao poet!
You have your first vote!
I like your creative approach in this contest.
Yes kids have vivid imagination and often that imagination can play nasty tricks.
A branch scratching on the glass window can seem like nails of a monster , the wind howling like a werewolf, shadows on the wall , creeping floors demons come to haunt the list is long.
All monsters created in their minds but still capable to scare a child , make them tremble.
I like the idea of praying to the Lord for protection.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Short and sweet and really neat, I can imagine myself praying that way, way back when I was a lad of ten. The dark was mysterious, and my mind seriously threatened while in its grip until fatigue forced me to sleep.
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Short and sweet and really neat, I can imagine myself praying that way, way back when I was a lad of ten. The dark was mysterious, and my mind seriously threatened while in its grip until fatigue forced me to sleep.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2022
Comment from Brett Matthew West
"ten years old" should be ten year old's.
"bed time" should be bedtime.
Cute little promise that sounds like what a ten year old would say.
Who wants to sleep if monsters haunt them?
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"ten years old" should be ten year old's.
"bed time" should be bedtime.
Cute little promise that sounds like what a ten year old would say.
Who wants to sleep if monsters haunt them?
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
Comment from papa55mike
We can make some crazy prayers when monsters under the bed are involved. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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We can make some crazy prayers when monsters under the bed are involved. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 08-Dec-2022
