Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from Liz O'Neill
You leave the image of the scene open for the reader to project their experiences. This is a strong sensory poem. Just about every sense is being affected or impacted. Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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You leave the image of the scene open for the reader to project their experiences. This is a strong sensory poem. Just about every sense is being affected or impacted. Well done.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Liz, thanks for your comments. 🙏
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Well done
Comment from Aussie
One of the warmest poems I have read about your American Christmas. I loved it and obviously many other people did too. Congrats on All Time Best status and a very Happy Christmas JLR. K xx
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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One of the warmest poems I have read about your American Christmas. I loved it and obviously many other people did too. Congrats on All Time Best status and a very Happy Christmas JLR. K xx
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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K thanks so much, I am aware that our polar opposite seasons are counterpoints in many of these posts.
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a lovely and well-executed entry for your club. I love the picture. It makes me homesick for my childhood years. I enjoyed reading your writing and hope to read more soon.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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This is a lovely and well-executed entry for your club. I love the picture. It makes me homesick for my childhood years. I enjoyed reading your writing and hope to read more soon.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Thank you for this validation.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
loved this line
December's full moon glows brightly on the snow
casting long shadows of us; and the two deer
pay close attention to us and our cargo
treading along the snow laden trail, so clear.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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loved this line
December's full moon glows brightly on the snow
casting long shadows of us; and the two deer
pay close attention to us and our cargo
treading along the snow laden trail, so clear.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2022
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Jake, Thanks, I do hope that as your holiday season unfolds you are in the bests of health, find Joy often throughout the day and Peace well into the coming year.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely story interpretation of this artwork for the picture this club, JLR. I could almost smell Ma's apple strudel. Your words created a very visual scene. Lovely read, cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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This is a lovely story interpretation of this artwork for the picture this club, JLR. I could almost smell Ma's apple strudel. Your words created a very visual scene. Lovely read, cheers
Valda
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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Valda, thank you!
Comment from mermaids
This a wonderful Christmas poem and I want some apple strudel, sounds so inviting and delicious. Your words create a vivid scene, one that brings forth a feeling happiness as the tree is brought home and the deer look on. Excellent poetic form and use of words.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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This a wonderful Christmas poem and I want some apple strudel, sounds so inviting and delicious. Your words create a vivid scene, one that brings forth a feeling happiness as the tree is brought home and the deer look on. Excellent poetic form and use of words.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much, May the Joys of the holidays spill over all next year! JLR
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I enjoy your rhyming poem for this club. It's about warm home life, hearty meals and pie. It's also about the joy of getting a Christmas tree and expecting the incoming celebration. The chimney is working and Santa is coming.
Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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I enjoy your rhyming poem for this club. It's about warm home life, hearty meals and pie. It's also about the joy of getting a Christmas tree and expecting the incoming celebration. The chimney is working and Santa is coming.
Well done.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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Jasmine Girl, Thank you so much, May the Joys of the holidays spill over all next year! JLR
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, this is a lovely contribution to the 'picture this' club. I would say that the picture was just the inspiration to your lovely poem. It was a joy to read. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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Hi there, this is a lovely contribution to the 'picture this' club. I would say that the picture was just the inspiration to your lovely poem. It was a joy to read. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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Ulla, thank so much! Thank you so much, May the Joys of the holidays spill over all next year! JLR
Comment from lyenochka
You covered everything in the picture in your well-rhymed quatrains. And you even ended with a heart of gratefulness so rare these days. I wonder how many kids today would be grateful just for a tree and apple strudel.
Hope you and yours will be especially blessed this Christmas, Jim!
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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You covered everything in the picture in your well-rhymed quatrains. And you even ended with a heart of gratefulness so rare these days. I wonder how many kids today would be grateful just for a tree and apple strudel.
Hope you and yours will be especially blessed this Christmas, Jim!
Comment Written 09-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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lyenochka, thank you, May the best of all Joy and Peace be yours this Christmas, Jim
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem. Describing the given scene quite nicely.
A tug of excitement grasps my bounding heart
as Pa leads us to our home, well lit, and warm.
I drag the fresh cut Yule tree, doing my part
under the clear sky there will be no snowstorm. Very well done ð???
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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This is a beautifully written poem. Describing the given scene quite nicely.
A tug of excitement grasps my bounding heart
as Pa leads us to our home, well lit, and warm.
I drag the fresh cut Yule tree, doing my part
under the clear sky there will be no snowstorm. Very well done ð???
Comment Written 09-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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Joanne, thank you, May the best of all Joy and Peace be yours this Christmas, Jim
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Thank you and Your welcome
