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Hospice Heart

Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "The Picture the Person"
This is a biography of a hospice nurse--me

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Comment from Ulla
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Thanks lot for sharing this. It must be hard work to help people with their passing and to comfort the family with their grief. Thanks again for sharing. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
    Thank you for reading and the feedback.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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What a great and meaningful idea to write a book about your experiences as a hospice nurse. This story is extremely interesting and does provide some comfort that perhaps a guide comes to help us pass. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
    Thank you for reading and the feedback
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your story was interesting, SL. I enjoyed reading it though it was
poignant. I believed everything you wrote you heard, saw, or smelled.
You phrased your words well with no judgment towards those who
believe in the spirit world and those that don't. Your words were
well thought out.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

guild (guide) them to the afterlife. There was none, and according to the family alive ( delete the word alive. The family believed they still needed to visit the patient.) still need to visit the patient. Therefore, I figured she was wanting for her guide

help her crossover )cross over) to the other side.

As I continue to monitor the patient (comma after patient/delete and)and she

I woke the family (who gathered, , , ) and they all gathered at the bedside grieving in their way.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
    Thank you for reading and the feedback. I appreciate the comments and I made the corrections you suggested. Thank you again for reading.
reply by Jannypan (Jan) on 07-Dec-2022
    😊🐈‍⬛
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this with us. I think my father-in-law is headed for hospice. I hope he gets a nurse like you.

I wouldn't't watch television unless the patient wanted it on all night to sleep, (wouldn't)

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
    Thank you for reading and the feedback. Thank you for saying you hope your father-in-law gets a nurse like me. I always appreciated your feedback. I did change what you pointing out the correction needed. Your father-in-law will be in my prayers. If there are any questions I can answer please let me know. You can email me at sandra.morrical@outlook.com. Thank you for reading.
reply by barbara.wilkey on 08-Dec-2022
    John passed away early Tuesday morning.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
    Sorry for your loss and I hope it was peaceful. I will say a prayer for you and your family