Joy vs Happiness
Happiness is afraid of sorrow; Joy is not.20 total reviews
Comment from nomi338
If I read this correctly, happiness only occurs when something you want to happen occurs. Joy on the other hand is internal and exists despite external conditions or influences.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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If I read this correctly, happiness only occurs when something you want to happen occurs. Joy on the other hand is internal and exists despite external conditions or influences.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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You are exactly right...very well put. Thank you for your review. John
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I looked up the meaning of happiness and speaks of it being characterized by feelings of joy, so one contains the other, I suppose. Yet, if you are using the Bible verse from John to write from, this poem makes perfect sense. Plus it sounds nice when it flows off the tongue:-)
Good luck with the contest.
Pam
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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I looked up the meaning of happiness and speaks of it being characterized by feelings of joy, so one contains the other, I suppose. Yet, if you are using the Bible verse from John to write from, this poem makes perfect sense. Plus it sounds nice when it flows off the tongue:-)
Good luck with the contest.
Pam
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your thoughtful and interesting review. I was looking at the meaning of both words from the biblical senset. I think someone who is grief-stricken would not consider themselves as happy; however, in faith they could have a joyful heart. I appreciate your insight.
John
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry was well thought out, John. I enjoyed
reading it. I liked the way you defined happiness and joy
as two different concepts. Yes, happiness is somewhat
fleeting depending on the situation. But joy is something
one feels deep inside, and it helps when things in life hit
that aren't always positive.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Your contest entry was well thought out, John. I enjoyed
reading it. I liked the way you defined happiness and joy
as two different concepts. Yes, happiness is somewhat
fleeting depending on the situation. But joy is something
one feels deep inside, and it helps when things in life hit
that aren't always positive.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Thanks, Jan. You're so right. I'm glad you understand what I was trying to say through this poem. I appreciate your review.
John
Comment from Susan Newell
John,
I really like this one. The difference between the two was punctuated for me when I found for my husband (adopted) his biological heritage and four surviving siblings. Their reunion could described only as overflowing with joy.
Sue
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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John,
I really like this one. The difference between the two was punctuated for me when I found for my husband (adopted) his biological heritage and four surviving siblings. Their reunion could described only as overflowing with joy.
Sue
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Thanks for sharing that, Sue. You definitely experienced the essence of true joy. I appreciate your review.
John
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You are very welcome, John.
Comment from royowen
Yes, there are no guarantees in life, even scripture tells that. But it does say remain thankful, for a night in the valley will be rewarded with a day on the mountain top. Beautifully written John, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Yes, there are no guarantees in life, even scripture tells that. But it does say remain thankful, for a night in the valley will be rewarded with a day on the mountain top. Beautifully written John, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Thank you, my friend. Hope you and yours have a wonderful and blessed Christmas season. John
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You too John
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
Considering you only have two lines, this poem touches on a profound idea.
Life is unpredictable and joy and sorrow intertwine. Some may attribute it to chance, others like the poet to faith. In this respect the illustration iis appropriate.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Considering you only have two lines, this poem touches on a profound idea.
Life is unpredictable and joy and sorrow intertwine. Some may attribute it to chance, others like the poet to faith. In this respect the illustration iis appropriate.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Sometimes the deepest joy can be felt in the deepest sorrow. During those times, there is no room for happiness. Thank you for your review.
Comment from lyenochka
A brilliant comment on the difference between "happiness" and "joy" in your essence poem! Happiness is a temporary emotion but joy can deal with "tears tomorrow." Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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A brilliant comment on the difference between "happiness" and "joy" in your essence poem! Happiness is a temporary emotion but joy can deal with "tears tomorrow." Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Thank you. I am so glad you get what I was trying to say. I wasn't sure it came through. I really appreciate your kind words and best wishes.
John
Comment from susand3022
Hi John,
I liked this two line poem very much. These aren't always easy to write, as we try to pack a whole message into 12 little syllables.
Nicely done :)
Susan :)
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Hi John,
I liked this two line poem very much. These aren't always easy to write, as we try to pack a whole message into 12 little syllables.
Nicely done :)
Susan :)
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Thanks Susan. You're right, it requires some effort to squeeze meaning into so few syllables. Luckily, I'm a simple writer with few words. I appreciate your review.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
This is a great two-line entry for the contest. It is a very succinct and insightful differentiation between happiness (which can be fleeting) and joy (which is more lasting and stable). Well done.
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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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This is a great two-line entry for the contest. It is a very succinct and insightful differentiation between happiness (which can be fleeting) and joy (which is more lasting and stable). Well done.
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your review.
John
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Uh-oh...I forgot the contest requires an internal rhyme, as well. I had to go back and do some tweaking.
Comment from Sally Law
Beautifully penned and illustrated poem in time for Christmas! Yes, our joy as Christian's runs deep.
You hit the nail on the head with the external and external rhyme, John.
My very best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Beautifully penned and illustrated poem in time for Christmas! Yes, our joy as Christian's runs deep.
You hit the nail on the head with the external and external rhyme, John.
My very best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Sally. As always, I can count on you for the sweetest reviews. Thanks for your good luck wish, and I hope you and yours have a most joyous Christmas season.
John
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Oops!...I forgot the internal rhyme. Had to go back and tweak it a bit.
