Feborah Finds Fidelity
a script10 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Hahahaha, this is just too funny, Bill. Now I see what the setting is. Rabbits are rabbits, aren't they? But these are different. They come with an opinion. I love it. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Hahahaha, this is just too funny, Bill. Now I see what the setting is. Rabbits are rabbits, aren't they? But these are different. They come with an opinion. I love it. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Ulla
Comment from sunnilicious
A fable script is creative work. However, the situation is too adult and not something many women like myself would view as normal. You probably have a writing niche for yourself. Good.
Happy Holidays
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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A fable script is creative work. However, the situation is too adult and not something many women like myself would view as normal. You probably have a writing niche for yourself. Good.
Happy Holidays
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Getting a lot of reviews. It isn?t lurid.
Comment from susand3022
Tee-hee-hee... I get two in one day! Who would have thought you were going to get into the Bunny Brothel business? I'm loving Hercule. My first thought was Hercule Poirot, maybe he'll make some discoveries, eh? ;)
Susan :)
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Tee-hee-hee... I get two in one day! Who would have thought you were going to get into the Bunny Brothel business? I'm loving Hercule. My first thought was Hercule Poirot, maybe he'll make some discoveries, eh? ;)
Susan :)
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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I'm sure he'll make one.
Comment from BOO ghost
Oh, another beauty! Looks fantastic!
Reading...Hercule : I am a virgin, ma'am.
A good line. Bet he says that to all of the hares.
People breed more than rabbits these days. The human population is overpopulated.
Want a laugh? Watch Monty Python And The Holy Grail. Watch the killer bunnies video.
BOOtastic!
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Oh, another beauty! Looks fantastic!
Reading...Hercule : I am a virgin, ma'am.
A good line. Bet he says that to all of the hares.
People breed more than rabbits these days. The human population is overpopulated.
Want a laugh? Watch Monty Python And The Holy Grail. Watch the killer bunnies video.
BOOtastic!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you,BOO, for the great review.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
With less than two hundred words, it's pretty tough to get a feel for what this chapter is doing or where it's going.
You might consider a bit more in your post.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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With less than two hundred words, it's pretty tough to get a feel for what this chapter is doing or where it's going.
You might consider a bit more in your post.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Your suggestion is one I see often, Wayne.
Comment from nomi338
Looks like it could be a hot time in the old Hare-em tonight. Rabbits are known for their humpnisity. So I expect that even though he is inexperienced, he will be well taught by the girls with all the knowledge and experience.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Looks like it could be a hot time in the old Hare-em tonight. Rabbits are known for their humpnisity. So I expect that even though he is inexperienced, he will be well taught by the girls with all the knowledge and experience.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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I might have to use "hare-em" in the next scene.
Comment from damommy
Poor Hercule is in over his head with these does. I laughed at his experience of smelling a flower with a girl. So cute! Looking forward to more story.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Poor Hercule is in over his head with these does. I laughed at his experience of smelling a flower with a girl. So cute! Looking forward to more story.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Yvonne.
Comment from Ricky1024
This short Script was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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This short Script was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Doc
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! I think poor Hercule should go into detective work and run away from Soofoo and Feborah. Fun names and fun reference to Bugs and Thumper! I wonder what will happen to Hercule next.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Lol! I think poor Hercule should go into detective work and run away from Soofoo and Feborah. Fun names and fun reference to Bugs and Thumper! I wonder what will happen to Hercule next.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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I imagine he will be taking a lot of notes. : )
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
A bunny breeding brothel? LOL!!!!!! That is sooo funny! I love it. You've started this one brilliantly, Bill, I can't wait to read on. Will Hercule lose his virginity to Soofoo? Lol, will he leave and not come back? Bless him, Soofoo did embarrass him! Loved this, Bill!! I'll be back to see more. :)) Sandra xxxx
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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A bunny breeding brothel? LOL!!!!!! That is sooo funny! I love it. You've started this one brilliantly, Bill, I can't wait to read on. Will Hercule lose his virginity to Soofoo? Lol, will he leave and not come back? Bless him, Soofoo did embarrass him! Loved this, Bill!! I'll be back to see more. :)) Sandra xxxx
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Sandra, for the great review. Bill
