Unmindful Moon
Free verse27 total reviews
Comment from Sherry SG
It's a beautiful image that matches the lovely imagery painted by your words. I really liked the concept of the "bright and cheerful moon" disregarding your sorrow. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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It's a beautiful image that matches the lovely imagery painted by your words. I really liked the concept of the "bright and cheerful moon" disregarding your sorrow. Nicely done.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and liking the point I was trying to make
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A well written poem deserving of the extra star, Sanku.
-I like the title and the nature imagery.
-You set the scene very well in verse one.
-My favorite line is
"played hide and seek with floating clouds."
-I also like the personification of the moon
and how you bring the title into the poem.
-You do a good job showing the mood in the last verse.
-Very well done!!!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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-A well written poem deserving of the extra star, Sanku.
-I like the title and the nature imagery.
-You set the scene very well in verse one.
-My favorite line is
"played hide and seek with floating clouds."
-I also like the personification of the moon
and how you bring the title into the poem.
-You do a good job showing the mood in the last verse.
-Very well done!!!
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thank you once again for this honour. Sorry for the delay in reply
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You are very welcome and deserving. No problem about a delayed reply.
Comment from Janet Foor
A poignant and melancholy poem. Sometimes everything around us is bright and cheerful and we may just want to be left alone to mourn or grieve or just have a putty party.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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A poignant and melancholy poem. Sometimes everything around us is bright and cheerful and we may just want to be left alone to mourn or grieve or just have a putty party.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much once again for this honour. Santha.
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a lovely poem and the companion artwork is well suited. It's rather spooky and give me a lonesome feeling. It reminds me of the dirt road in front of my childhood home. I walked it many times under similar circumstances and under a moonlit sky.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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This is a lovely poem and the companion artwork is well suited. It's rather spooky and give me a lonesome feeling. It reminds me of the dirt road in front of my childhood home. I walked it many times under similar circumstances and under a moonlit sky.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much.The emotion is loneliness
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Yes, it is loneliness. I got that. Well done.
Comment from June Sargent
I enjoyed this bittersweet interpretation of the club artwork. There are times when we just want to be left alone with our sadness - to privately let it flow - uninhibited. Unfortunately, the moon was on a high and did not notice...
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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I enjoyed this bittersweet interpretation of the club artwork. There are times when we just want to be left alone with our sadness - to privately let it flow - uninhibited. Unfortunately, the moon was on a high and did not notice...
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much ,especially for understanding the crux.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes this scene is a bright moonlit night even if it is damp and raining and sometimes we would rather be unseen in our grief and sorrow, I can identify with your words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Yes this scene is a bright moonlit night even if it is damp and raining and sometimes we would rather be unseen in our grief and sorrow, I can identify with your words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for dropping by .Hugs Santha.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Sanku!
Just lovely!
Poignant as well, especially the last stanza:
For once I wished for a dark sky
moonless and starless
to leave me alone to let my
tears flow unseen.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Hello, Sanku!
Just lovely!
Poignant as well, especially the last stanza:
For once I wished for a dark sky
moonless and starless
to leave me alone to let my
tears flow unseen.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for dropping by.
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
A sad, melodic poem that captured my imagination immediately.
I was impressed with this excellent offering, superb wording, which is the basis of any good write. Good depiction of your thesis which followed the whole way through.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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A sad, melodic poem that captured my imagination immediately.
I was impressed with this excellent offering, superb wording, which is the basis of any good write. Good depiction of your thesis which followed the whole way through.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for these encouraging comments.I am quite happy that you liked this effort
Comment from Wendy G
A very moving poem. Thoughtfully written, and a creative way to approach the prompt image. I thought it was excellent in the way you created the night atmosphere. The moon is usually considered to offer comfort, and soft light, but here you have portrayed it as an unwanted, overly cheerful tease, playing games you could not appreciate or delight in. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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A very moving poem. Thoughtfully written, and a creative way to approach the prompt image. I thought it was excellent in the way you created the night atmosphere. The moon is usually considered to offer comfort, and soft light, but here you have portrayed it as an unwanted, overly cheerful tease, playing games you could not appreciate or delight in. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much ,Wendy for your understanding of the poem .
Comment from Gloria ....
Great atmosphere in your free verse. I think your poem addresses very succinctly the gloom of this misty artwork.
A pleasure to read and review, and a fine contribution to the Picture This Club.
Gloria
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Great atmosphere in your free verse. I think your poem addresses very succinctly the gloom of this misty artwork.
A pleasure to read and review, and a fine contribution to the Picture This Club.
Gloria
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for these lovely stars once again
