Light Glides In On Tide
a 5-7-5 poem15 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
You and the picture you chose set a lovely scene but I don't know what the reason behind the poem is. This seems all scenery yet no substance. Maybe I am wrong and I didn't get the gist of what you were saying...I certainly hope so. Thanks for letting me peruse your brief poem.
Jesse
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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You and the picture you chose set a lovely scene but I don't know what the reason behind the poem is. This seems all scenery yet no substance. Maybe I am wrong and I didn't get the gist of what you were saying...I certainly hope so. Thanks for letting me peruse your brief poem.
Jesse
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you much for reviewing. These little 5-7-5s are just enough to evoke an image or a moment. I usually write much longer poems.
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I couldn't tell what image you were trying to evoke. Sorry.
Jesse
Comment from karenina
Very intriguing first line...
Interweaving water and sunlight in an original way.
Thanks for sending me off to learn what an avocet is!
I've never seen a sea grape tree -- but the description of lace leaves sounds very appealing.
Very nice 5-7-5 with a great image...
Karenina
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Very intriguing first line...
Interweaving water and sunlight in an original way.
Thanks for sending me off to learn what an avocet is!
I've never seen a sea grape tree -- but the description of lace leaves sounds very appealing.
Very nice 5-7-5 with a great image...
Karenina
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your detailed review. It is much appreciated.
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My pleasure...
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An unusual scene you describe here, and I have never heard of a lace-leaf sea grape tree before and it does look rather unusual and pretty in the picture, I could see it gently gliding in the breeze, an atmospheric piece Crystie, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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An unusual scene you describe here, and I have never heard of a lace-leaf sea grape tree before and it does look rather unusual and pretty in the picture, I could see it gently gliding in the breeze, an atmospheric piece Crystie, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from lyenochka
I wish I could see the avocet but he's hiding in the shadows. I liked all the shore references from the shorebird, avocet, the "sea grape tree" and the assonance and internal rhymes of the first line. Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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I wish I could see the avocet but he's hiding in the shadows. I liked all the shore references from the shorebird, avocet, the "sea grape tree" and the assonance and internal rhymes of the first line. Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Well....I must admit I imagine birds even in places where they probably aren't really located. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Comment from Sanku
Beautiful photo .The description is short and succinct .In seventeen syllables you have given an a portrait ofsunset.I liked the line 'light glides in... All the best.
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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Beautiful photo .The description is short and succinct .In seventeen syllables you have given an a portrait ofsunset.I liked the line 'light glides in... All the best.
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your five-star review.
