Lessons?
life, I should think32 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
Life I think is a series of lessons that build on our accomplishments and within the parameters of our vision.
"Believe in yourself" is an excellent title.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Life I think is a series of lessons that build on our accomplishments and within the parameters of our vision.
"Believe in yourself" is an excellent title.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Janet.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Very nice indeed. This poem was very well-thought out and introspective.
This was my favorite line:
bring only
visions
of what passes
for a journey.
Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Very nice indeed. This poem was very well-thought out and introspective.
This was my favorite line:
bring only
visions
of what passes
for a journey.
Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much.
Doug
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
This poem was truly wonderful, a density of sound, a subtlety of imagery, and a surreal connection of image to experience.
The tone is soft and peaceful.
Excellent patterns of sound are used to create the music in language rather than ordered meter and rhyme scheme.
Mitchell
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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This poem was truly wonderful, a density of sound, a subtlety of imagery, and a surreal connection of image to experience.
The tone is soft and peaceful.
Excellent patterns of sound are used to create the music in language rather than ordered meter and rhyme scheme.
Mitchell
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Thank you Mitchell.
I appreciate it.
Doug
Comment from Frances Jean
An interesting and cleverly constructed piece. How fortunate are we to have brought many of our life's dreams to fruition; to build and own our home, to take our three daughters to Disneyland, to have grandchildren and travel the world. To enjoy the music, laughter and so much more. Thanks for sharing Franky
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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An interesting and cleverly constructed piece. How fortunate are we to have brought many of our life's dreams to fruition; to build and own our home, to take our three daughters to Disneyland, to have grandchildren and travel the world. To enjoy the music, laughter and so much more. Thanks for sharing Franky
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Thank you for reviewing, Frankie.
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar to Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar to Issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Doctor.
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
A truly inspiring photo that went well with the feelings that your poem generated. Believe in yourself, definitely your words spoke, keep trying, get up and perservere. Carry on your journey, keep your visions and dream on. Thats all that I felt. Great job..
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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A truly inspiring photo that went well with the feelings that your poem generated. Believe in yourself, definitely your words spoke, keep trying, get up and perservere. Carry on your journey, keep your visions and dream on. Thats all that I felt. Great job..
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from MissMerri
if I understood correctly, it seems the speaker embraced life with gusto, lived with enthusiasm and good intent, new success, but in the end, found that the dreams he held early on were not fully realized. This is full of delightful word combinations and heart-stirring images... such as: "Accomplishments,
with line
and parameter,
bring only
visions
of what passes
for a journey."
It is really a rather remarkable poem, and I enjoyed it very much.
MM
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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if I understood correctly, it seems the speaker embraced life with gusto, lived with enthusiasm and good intent, new success, but in the end, found that the dreams he held early on were not fully realized. This is full of delightful word combinations and heart-stirring images... such as: "Accomplishments,
with line
and parameter,
bring only
visions
of what passes
for a journey."
It is really a rather remarkable poem, and I enjoyed it very much.
MM
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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As did I your review.
Thanks for the six.
Doug
Comment from Dawn Munro
Victor, I am not sure I understood this one, not as I have understood your poetry in past, but something keeps directing me back to it, so I hope you won't be offended as I try to review it...
I think it is quite profoundly sad, and in all honesty, it resonates with me strongly. We all question our journey, and I think that is what your speaker is doing...
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Victor, I am not sure I understood this one, not as I have understood your poetry in past, but something keeps directing me back to it, so I hope you won't be offended as I try to review it...
I think it is quite profoundly sad, and in all honesty, it resonates with me strongly. We all question our journey, and I think that is what your speaker is doing...
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Yes, I think so too.
Thank you dear.
I always have loved your honesty,
and your reviews.
Doug
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Thank YOU -- and I always thought your name was Victor -- my apologies, Doug. :))
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Well, my pen name is victor.
Lol
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I am thinking your poem is telling what you wanted or expected out of your life and then the results. Our dreams don't always turn out the way we want them, but then, in the end, we can see reality.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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I am thinking your poem is telling what you wanted or expected out of your life and then the results. Our dreams don't always turn out the way we want them, but then, in the end, we can see reality.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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So true.
Too true.
Doug
Comment from estory
Loved how you constructed this with all these fragments of language that create this abstract expressionist, impressionist experience of life. Especially the opening. The feeling of who, what when and where, the in and out of time, lends to this ambiguity of time and space and experience. Great job there. This is almost like a new Romantic sensibility, or a new way of expressing this romantic sensibility of the imperfect nature of experience in terms that the contemporary society can understand. estory
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Loved how you constructed this with all these fragments of language that create this abstract expressionist, impressionist experience of life. Especially the opening. The feeling of who, what when and where, the in and out of time, lends to this ambiguity of time and space and experience. Great job there. This is almost like a new Romantic sensibility, or a new way of expressing this romantic sensibility of the imperfect nature of experience in terms that the contemporary society can understand. estory
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you for stopping by.
Oh and for my only six. Lol
I am and have been in ur debt as to the appreciation of my writing. I am deeply grateful.
Doug
