Some Call It Luck
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Some Call It Luck"A unique friendship affects the course of 2 lives.
3 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
Well Abby certainly wasn't insecure when she was eight. She was brilliant, confident and assertive. It will interesting to what changed her from the trajectory she was on.
Well written beginning. I guess we will see the guy next.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Well Abby certainly wasn't insecure when she was eight. She was brilliant, confident and assertive. It will interesting to what changed her from the trajectory she was on.
Well written beginning. I guess we will see the guy next.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much for your good review. If you keep reading, you'll see that she does much better with adults than with kids her own age.
Yep, Chapter 2 is about the guy.
Comment from Ricky1024
This chapter was well written rich in theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing and have a Blessed Thanksgiving.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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This chapter was well written rich in theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing and have a Blessed Thanksgiving.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. We will meet the other main character in the story in Chapter 2.
Comment from prettybluebirds
This looks like the beginning of a wonderful story. I like your Abby character and look forward to reading more about her. Your dialogue is great and takes the story forward in a nice manner.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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This looks like the beginning of a wonderful story. I like your Abby character and look forward to reading more about her. Your dialogue is great and takes the story forward in a nice manner.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for your good review. We'll get back to Abby in Chapter 3. In Chapter 2 you'll meet the other main character who is very different from Abby.
