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Comment from Frances Jean
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A delightful birthday tribute to Jan in this well written, humorous poem. I love the way the question marks grow. Great end rhyming. My daughter, single at 46, has a Rag Doll cat which she absolutely adores and spoils to the point of insanity. Thanks for sharing. Franky

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Franky. You are so incredibly sweet and I know Jan will appreciate your lovely comments as much as I do. Thanks again my dear friend! And also, I wish you and yours a Happy Thanksgiving.
    God Bless you and may He keep you all safe through the holiday season.
Comment from Barry Penfold
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What an interesting approach to a heartfelt poem. A good read and confirmation that there is a huge amount of talent on this site.
Take care and have a good day.
Regards
Barry Penfold

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Barry. You are so kind and I know Jan will appreciate your lovely comments as much as I do. Thanks again my dear friend! And also, I wish you and yours a Happy Thanksgiving. God Bless you and may He keep you all safe through the holiday season.
reply by Barry Penfold on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks. Same to you as well
Comment from Paul McFarland
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Good job, Debi. I am sure that Jan got a kick out of your poem. A nice mix of celebration and humor. In line six, I think "county" should be "country".

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Paul. You are so kind and I know Jan will appreciate your awesome comments as much as I do. Thanks again my dear friend!
    And also, I wish you and yours a Happy Thanksgiving. I am very thankful for y,our friendship. It truly means so much to me.
    God Bless you and may He keep you all safe through the holiday season.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A fine tribute for Jan on her birthday and I enjoyed your positivity here Debi, your rhymes and your flow. We can't really know people on line that we have never met, but we learn about them through their poetry, fine words, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Dolly! I appreciate your lovely review and comments and I know Jan will as well. I believe myself to be a pretty good judge of character and associate with some here more than in my home life. I think it is easier to see what is in someone's soul, by keeping your ears and your heart open, and through reviews, writing and messages can actually truly know them more than some who you know by a physical relationship. Just my opinion tho, but I have come to care for so many here, you included my sweet friend. Thank you again Dolly and have a blessed day tomorrow!
Comment from lyenochka
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I LOVED this and yes, I got your humor of your growing question marks, Debi! You're so much fun. Enjoyed your lovely poem for our lovely Jan. She is a friend to many of us here! And we learn a lot from her!

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 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
    Thank you dear Helen for your sweet comments about my poem for Jan.
    I truly appreciate you so much. I hope you have a lovely day tomorrow with family. We have missed the last two years due to Covid, so I am looking forward to it so much. We only need to drive a few yards to get to my son's house, since they live right next door. Once again, l need to tell you, I am so thankful for you. God Bless!
reply by lyenochka on 24-Nov-2022
    I'm glad you don't have far to go but are you feeling well enough? How is your grandson?
    We won't do our Thanksgiving until Saturday with our older daughter. Tomorrow we'll have a small feast with our younger one.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
    After missing the last two years, I would go there in an ambulance if I had to. I just know that I am not contagious, because I was put on antibiotics when they noted that this last bug was bacterial. And I am sure they gave him some too. So he will have them in his system for way over 24 hours. So I think if I am going to pick up anything else, it will be from someone who doesn't know they have something yet.
reply by lyenochka on 24-Nov-2022
    God's love covers all. Will be praying for protection for all of us!! 💖🙏
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
    Me too! I pray for you all daily. It's the greatest gift we can give the people we love.
reply by lyenochka on 24-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much, Debi!! 💖💖