Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 90 "Snowstorm"Musings of an old man - 2022
37 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem about the dangers and joys of snowy winter scenes is skillfully written and delightfully descriptive. As for snow, I'd like to see a pleasant medium between the little bit we get here in Mississippi and the six feet they got in New York.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Your poem about the dangers and joys of snowy winter scenes is skillfully written and delightfully descriptive. As for snow, I'd like to see a pleasant medium between the little bit we get here in Mississippi and the six feet they got in New York.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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I love our little enclave in western NC. We get one or two snow experiences in the winter months. Enough to enjoy the beauty of the landscape and then it melts away in a few days.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I loved the evocative feel of this. It's funny how some people hate the sight of snow and some love it. Kind of like the glass is half empty or half full. Your rhyming scheme was on point. I liked the visuals from your words. The beginning and ending lines brought it full circle. Gretchen
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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I loved the evocative feel of this. It's funny how some people hate the sight of snow and some love it. Kind of like the glass is half empty or half full. Your rhyming scheme was on point. I liked the visuals from your words. The beginning and ending lines brought it full circle. Gretchen
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Gretchen, as a child I grew up in harsh long winters with many opportunities for sledding, skiing, skating. Now, I love our little enclave in western NC. We get one or two snow experiences in the winter months. Enough to enjoy the beauty of the landscape and then it melts away in a few days.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-A well written poem with effective imagery,
rhyme, and repeating line.
-You paint a good word picture of the snowfall.
-I like how each verse is a different situation.
-You start with the people who have to drive in
adverse conditions, causing headaches and slipping and sliding.
-The children have the most fun, and you do a good job showing that.
-The last verse is more quiet and peaceful as a couple takes a walk
with their dog in the park and the white landscape.
-Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-A well written poem with effective imagery,
rhyme, and repeating line.
-You paint a good word picture of the snowfall.
-I like how each verse is a different situation.
-You start with the people who have to drive in
adverse conditions, causing headaches and slipping and sliding.
-The children have the most fun, and you do a good job showing that.
-The last verse is more quiet and peaceful as a couple takes a walk
with their dog in the park and the white landscape.
-Well done.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thanks and Pam, Happiest of Thanksgiving holidays from a fan!
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You are very welcome, Jim, and Happy Thanksgiving to you, too!
Comment from Gloria ....
Well done, J. You have adhered to the rhyme scheme required of the form, and also deftly wove in the first line as also the last line.
Your winter imagery and fun and not so fun of the snow season is well illustrated within three stanzas.
Excellent contribution to the Potlatch Club. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Well done, J. You have adhered to the rhyme scheme required of the form, and also deftly wove in the first line as also the last line.
Your winter imagery and fun and not so fun of the snow season is well illustrated within three stanzas.
Excellent contribution to the Potlatch Club. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Thank you Gloria, Happy Thanksgiving!
Comment from nomi338
Sounds wonderful and nice. I used to engage with such before I discovered that Winter wonderlands were not really my cup of tea. I relocated to sunny Southern California and discovered that iced tea on a sun splashed patio was much more to my liking. So, here I am and here is probably where I shall forever reside.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Sounds wonderful and nice. I used to engage with such before I discovered that Winter wonderlands were not really my cup of tea. I relocated to sunny Southern California and discovered that iced tea on a sun splashed patio was much more to my liking. So, here I am and here is probably where I shall forever reside.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Nomi, happiest of Thanksgiving days, JIm
Comment from estory
The contrast between the childhood and adult experiences of snow is what got my attention in this poem. We see how much fun it is for the kids sledding and enjoying the magic of the snow, but also how much of a headache it is for the adults trying to drive around getting stuck on those snowy hills. estory
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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The contrast between the childhood and adult experiences of snow is what got my attention in this poem. We see how much fun it is for the kids sledding and enjoying the magic of the snow, but also how much of a headache it is for the adults trying to drive around getting stuck on those snowy hills. estory
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Smiles!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words made me ponder on the excitement attached to a
snowstorm. I thought of New York and how my sons had so much fun!
It also made me think of the beauty of snow and the landscape. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words!
Happy Thanksgiving!....Maria
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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The author's words made me ponder on the excitement attached to a
snowstorm. I thought of New York and how my sons had so much fun!
It also made me think of the beauty of snow and the landscape. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words!
Happy Thanksgiving!....Maria
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Maria. happiest of Thanksgiving holidays.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
What a great upbeat poem about a season that can, to some of us, be threatening and unwelcome. I love the entire second stanza because it brings back my childhood days of wonderment and amazement at the wonderful piles and flows of beautiful white, slippery snow.
Great rhyming scheme, right in line with the requirements and still you kept it entertaining and easily read.
Good job
Gary M
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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What a great upbeat poem about a season that can, to some of us, be threatening and unwelcome. I love the entire second stanza because it brings back my childhood days of wonderment and amazement at the wonderful piles and flows of beautiful white, slippery snow.
Great rhyming scheme, right in line with the requirements and still you kept it entertaining and easily read.
Good job
Gary M
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Gary thanks so much! Wow! happy Thanksgiving!
Comment from Frances Jean
What a great poem written with wonderful rhyming and some nice alliteration. I love this format. It flows nicely and the picture you have chosen to accompany your piece suits perfectly. Thanks for sharing. Franky
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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What a great poem written with wonderful rhyming and some nice alliteration. I love this format. It flows nicely and the picture you have chosen to accompany your piece suits perfectly. Thanks for sharing. Franky
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Franky, thank you so very much for your kind validation.
Comment from Paul McFarland
I am waiting for that first snow storm of the year. It look like Buffalo has just had theirs. I hope that is not a portent of what is in store for us in Maine.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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I am waiting for that first snow storm of the year. It look like Buffalo has just had theirs. I hope that is not a portent of what is in store for us in Maine.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Paul, I have spent the longest months of my life in Maine so I can relate to your sense of concern.
