Comment from Richard Montfort Cary

Excellent

Thoroughly enjoyed this one - and the photo that tells all. And the wonderfully easy twist at the end - very nicely done. Congrats! Hope this one wins, but who cares!? A good poem is a good poem!

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022

It?s fun to win and I?m doing well, but I just really love to write! Thanks for the review my friend.

reply by Richard Montfort Cary on 15-Nov-2022

Looking forward to more...

Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot

Excellent

I love this. So fun to read. And oh so true. It has truly brought me laughter. Thank you for sharing. Good Luck.
Keep writing
Keep sharing
Good Luck
Next time take a train it is so much more enjoyable, I truly dislike all that traffic as well.

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 Comment Written 14-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022

Sorry, been busy as usual. Train? Say whaaaaat?

reply by Barbara Peabody Pouliot on 15-Nov-2022

I Love to ride the train into the City, so relaxing!

reply by Barbara Peabody Pouliot on 15-Nov-2022

Please read my new poem tomorrow!!!!!!!!!!

Comment from Regina Elliott

Excellent

The twist at the end is fab.
I have a relative-who doesn't
care for slow moving traffic.
Well, she isn't patient when
she drives, lol! Told her she's
got to chill on the-road. I
appreciate this poems humor.
Best wishes for the contest.


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 Comment Written 14-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022

Thanks for the well wishes! Lots of interesting contenders but I think that I will place. I appreciate your review and kind words!