Finding A Friend
You never know when you'll be...9 total reviews
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
I absolutely love this. So cute, so light, so sweet with a sprinkle of humor..
Yet it has depth! Brilliantly written. Good Luck.
Write On Share on!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
I absolutely love this. So cute, so light, so sweet with a sprinkle of humor..
Yet it has depth! Brilliantly written. Good Luck.
Write On Share on!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you for this exceptional review, it means a lot to me. :)
Comment from Tom Horonzy
This may have a chance of a win if what the originator meant was to tell the world what a Rogadoo might be. I thought we could write anything and did.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
This may have a chance of a win if what the originator meant was to tell the world what a Rogadoo might be. I thought we could write anything and did.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you. I hope I did this correctly, it was an unusual prompt. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is quite a tale you weave about this creature. The text is a great size. The verses are clearly stated leading the reader to this fantastical creature. I wish the plot was a bit longer. To go from a first encounter to immediate friends is a bit abrupt. The visual fits perfectly. How did you find it? Or did you find the visual and then create the poem? Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
This is quite a tale you weave about this creature. The text is a great size. The verses are clearly stated leading the reader to this fantastical creature. I wish the plot was a bit longer. To go from a first encounter to immediate friends is a bit abrupt. The visual fits perfectly. How did you find it? Or did you find the visual and then create the poem? Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thank you, I appreciate great reviewers like you. :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from DragonSkulls
This is an excellent piece for the contest, author. Great little story and descriptions. Love the picture as well. I hope you do well in the booth.
Great piece. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
This is an excellent piece for the contest, author. Great little story and descriptions. Love the picture as well. I hope you do well in the booth.
Great piece. Best of luck.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thanks for reading.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Regina Elliott
Hi! A very imaginative and
creative poem response to
the writing prompt. Cute
little bugger! I hope you have
success in the competition.
All the best to you. ~
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
Hi! A very imaginative and
creative poem response to
the writing prompt. Cute
little bugger! I hope you have
success in the competition.
All the best to you. ~
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much, its very appreciated. :)
Comment from Julie G1
This is a great poem, well done. Good use of imagery, clear and concise language, well chosen. Your rhyming was well done too. I liked the graphic, worked for this reader. I hope you keep on composing more poetry.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
This is a great poem, well done. Good use of imagery, clear and concise language, well chosen. Your rhyming was well done too. I liked the graphic, worked for this reader. I hope you keep on composing more poetry.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much for this great review. :)
Comment from royowen
I think you've taken what could have been a defiant challenge, and run with it very well indeed, with great flow, an imaginative Narrative, you've spun a beautifully written, articulated and well rhymed entry in this contest, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
I think you've taken what could have been a defiant challenge, and run with it very well indeed, with great flow, an imaginative Narrative, you've spun a beautifully written, articulated and well rhymed entry in this contest, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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I appreciate this terrific review. :)
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A pleasure
Comment from WriterHeather
Oh this is so cute. I love your take on this unusual prompt. What a cute little friendship that was made. This reminded me a bit of Dr. Seuss. Well done!
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
Oh this is so cute. I love your take on this unusual prompt. What a cute little friendship that was made. This reminded me a bit of Dr. Seuss. Well done!
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thank you, that's an amazing compliment. I appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Your new friend seems to be such a sweet friend. The storm was frightful but out of it came a new friend. Cute picture. And he sounds like a lovely find, that rogadoo.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
Your new friend seems to be such a sweet friend. The storm was frightful but out of it came a new friend. Cute picture. And he sounds like a lovely find, that rogadoo.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thank you. I wasn't sure where to go with this, but the name just made me think of children, so I went in that direction. Thanks again for reading my poem. :)