Death By Murder
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Death By Murder - Chap 10"A jewel heist, rival gangs and a cold case.
19 total reviews
Comment from karenina
I know you'll never disappoint, Carol ~ and you never do! I hadn't anticipated the ramification of other's overhearing Bennie's conversation and taking the opportunity to beat the facts out of Rudy...
But YOU did!
Yay for Sandy and her bat! Never send a boy on a woman's errand I say!
Chills and thrills for this chapter.
I hope Rudy is alright and oh, I hope Mason and Paddy don't get too far!
Karenina
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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I know you'll never disappoint, Carol ~ and you never do! I hadn't anticipated the ramification of other's overhearing Bennie's conversation and taking the opportunity to beat the facts out of Rudy...
But YOU did!
Yay for Sandy and her bat! Never send a boy on a woman's errand I say!
Chills and thrills for this chapter.
I hope Rudy is alright and oh, I hope Mason and Paddy don't get too far!
Karenina
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Mason and Paddy are still in hot pursuit... The unsophisticated criminals might meet their match if they aren't careful, but for now they seem to clumsily overcome their faults.
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Heh. heh.
Like most inept criminals, they think they've got it ALL figured out!
Comment from Carol Clark2
Oh, poor Rudy. I'm glad Sandy was able to help him, and I hope he survives this attack & beating. Mason seems to be a miserable person, but Paddy has a bit of a heart. I hope they'll be caught. Blessings.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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Oh, poor Rudy. I'm glad Sandy was able to help him, and I hope he survives this attack & beating. Mason seems to be a miserable person, but Paddy has a bit of a heart. I hope they'll be caught. Blessings.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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Two in a row!! I am blinded by the stars and overwhelmed with your thoughtfulness. Thank you for enjoying the story.
Hugs, Carol
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I'm getting caught up on all your chapters, finally. Enjoying the book!
Have a blessed weekend.
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, we left the happy couple falling in love and had to witness an awful beating. Bennie should have kept his mouth shut but he had too much to drink. But his father could keep silent even while being beaten. I guess Bennie will have to leave town with Lance...
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Oh, we left the happy couple falling in love and had to witness an awful beating. Bennie should have kept his mouth shut but he had too much to drink. But his father could keep silent even while being beaten. I guess Bennie will have to leave town with Lance...
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Fatherly love, I guess. Rudy protected his son till the end. Thank you for the review/ Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Thesis
A very good read. You described the scene well and portrayed the characters well. What initially looked like two good samaratins helping a drunk man home, turned into an opportunistic reality that almost cost a man his life.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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A very good read. You described the scene well and portrayed the characters well. What initially looked like two good samaratins helping a drunk man home, turned into an opportunistic reality that almost cost a man his life.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you for reading this chapter and enjoying it. I hope you enjoy all the twists and turns within the story. I love to add the surprise.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. I am pleasantly surprised that Rudy did not spill the beans. His son will be proud of him. There is no room for improvement. I look forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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This is another excellent chapter. I am pleasantly surprised that Rudy did not spill the beans. His son will be proud of him. There is no room for improvement. I look forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much again. I appreciate your kindness and for enjoying the story.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Your writing is always descriptive and paints vivid pictures that are hard to forget, but I much say that I'll probably be seeing blood and teeth sliding out of someone's mouth in my dreams tonight. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Your writing is always descriptive and paints vivid pictures that are hard to forget, but I much say that I'll probably be seeing blood and teeth sliding out of someone's mouth in my dreams tonight. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you as always for your kindness and for enjoying my style of writing. So glad I haven't lost my touch... something I was afraid of during my long hiatus. Writing helps!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh it doesn't look good for Rudy, I hope he didn't let those morons about the jewels. I don't think he did, or they would have been gone already. At least Sandy knew who was going to take Randy home. Bernie is going to be really upset now. You wrote this exceedingly well, Carol, I was there with Sandy, feeling her pain and fears. I love that it's a small place where everyone knows everyone, it's a bit like the village I grew up in, if you did something naughty, everyone knew about it! LOL, including my mum! Well done, my clever friend, wonderful chapter. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Oh it doesn't look good for Rudy, I hope he didn't let those morons about the jewels. I don't think he did, or they would have been gone already. At least Sandy knew who was going to take Randy home. Bernie is going to be really upset now. You wrote this exceedingly well, Carol, I was there with Sandy, feeling her pain and fears. I love that it's a small place where everyone knows everyone, it's a bit like the village I grew up in, if you did something naughty, everyone knew about it! LOL, including my mum! Well done, my clever friend, wonderful chapter. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Hurrah! I looked for you all day yesterday, hoping to see how you felt about this chapter. I am thrilled with your thoughts. thank you so much and I have so many hidden secrets to reveal as we progress.
Smiles, hugs and of course, my love, Carol
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I'm sorry I didn't get to you yesterday, it was my daughter-in-laws birthday and I ran out of time. I like to read and enjoy your chapters, not rush through them. It was brilliant! xxx
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No problem.. You know how eager I always am... Hope you had a marvelous day. Family is important. I am losing so much of mine. Love you, Carol
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Love you too, my friend. xxxx
Comment from royowen
This was an exciting episode With poor Rudy being beaten up by Mason and paddy,, they make their escape while the cops turn up, this is a great post dear Carol, well done, blesskngs Roy
Typo : Help('s) coming
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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This was an exciting episode With poor Rudy being beaten up by Mason and paddy,, they make their escape while the cops turn up, this is a great post dear Carol, well done, blesskngs Roy
Typo : Help('s) coming
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it very much. I am so happy to be back writing and sharing.
Hugs, Carol
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So am I Carol
Comment from Teri7
This was a very edge of my seat chapter to read. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery from your words. You are a great writer my friend! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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This was a very edge of my seat chapter to read. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery from your words. You are a great writer my friend! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Edge of your seat is good! Thank you for your kindness and for enjoying the story.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Oh you stopped! I was engrossed. It's a riveting story and your writing is excellent. The switching between scenes works well too. Looking forward to more.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Oh you stopped! I was engrossed. It's a riveting story and your writing is excellent. The switching between scenes works well too. Looking forward to more.
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Good morning, Wendy
I am thrilled that I can leave you on the edge of your chair wanting more of the story. I makes my day!
Smiles, Carol
