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Thanksgiving Holds My...8 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry to the Thanksgiving Poem Contest. The text is a nice size. The message is clearly stated. The rhyme scheme is well done. It's almost singsong ~great!
The visual fits perfectly. I love it being a gif with the pie dropping down with whip cream. This is my favorite thus far. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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This is a good entry to the Thanksgiving Poem Contest. The text is a nice size. The message is clearly stated. The rhyme scheme is well done. It's almost singsong ~great!
The visual fits perfectly. I love it being a gif with the pie dropping down with whip cream. This is my favorite thus far. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this thoughtful review. :)
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You are welcome. I voted for you.
Comment from AprilViolet
Cute poem! I can't wait for Thanksgiving either. It's the first one with my daughter. My favorite is the jellied cranberries in the can! Yum yum! HAPPY Thanksgiving!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Cute poem! I can't wait for Thanksgiving either. It's the first one with my daughter. My favorite is the jellied cranberries in the can! Yum yum! HAPPY Thanksgiving!
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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I love those too. Thank you for this incredible review, it's amazing. :)
Comment from royowen
What a beautifully poem celebrating thanksgiving, although we don't celebrate thanksgiving specifically, it is such a darn good idea, because we are celebrating Jehovah Jirah, our provider more than anything, then celebration of family. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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What a beautifully poem celebrating thanksgiving, although we don't celebrate thanksgiving specifically, it is such a darn good idea, because we are celebrating Jehovah Jirah, our provider more than anything, then celebration of family. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review, I greatly appreciate it. :)
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Most welcome
Comment from Mariana Convery
Great imagery here. Definitely makes me want to eat that turkey dinner!
However, in the first quatrain, I'm not sure why the narrator "sighs." It elicits a negative connotation to the dinner, yet, the rest of the poem has a different, more positive tone.
Also, I really enjoyed the rhyme scheme until the fourth stanza, which didn't flow with the rest of the poem.
Otherwise, nice job.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Great imagery here. Definitely makes me want to eat that turkey dinner!
However, in the first quatrain, I'm not sure why the narrator "sighs." It elicits a negative connotation to the dinner, yet, the rest of the poem has a different, more positive tone.
Also, I really enjoyed the rhyme scheme until the fourth stanza, which didn't flow with the rest of the poem.
Otherwise, nice job.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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You are absolutely correct...about the fourth stanza! I can't believe I did that and I changed it, thanks to you. I will say that I've heard the word sigh used in connection with pleasure, so that's what I meant. Thanks so much for the correction, its very helpful. :)
Comment from Sally Law
Ah, this is just precious! We are much the same as we spy the pumpkin pie together! For two, pretty please?
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Ah, this is just precious! We are much the same as we spy the pumpkin pie together! For two, pretty please?
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Thank you for this lovely review, so glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Theodore McDowell
You made my mouth water with holiday delights, especially the pie.
Good response to the prompt. You put me in the mood for Thanksgiving. Good job!!!!!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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You made my mouth water with holiday delights, especially the pie.
Good response to the prompt. You put me in the mood for Thanksgiving. Good job!!!!!
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Thanks for this terrific review. :)
Comment from zanya
This poem provides a lovely prelude to that special celebration of Thanksgiving and the food and fare shared with family and friends - thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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This poem provides a lovely prelude to that special celebration of Thanksgiving and the food and fare shared with family and friends - thanks for sharing
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Thank you for such a nice review. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A feast here for all and I have no idea why this turkey looks so happy! Enjoy your thanksgiving with a smile as the feast is served, fine rhymes and sentiment here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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A feast here for all and I have no idea why this turkey looks so happy! Enjoy your thanksgiving with a smile as the feast is served, fine rhymes and sentiment here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this nice review. :)
