Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a good entry into the Witty Animal 5-7-5 contest. The message is clearly presented. The visual is cute and fits well. However, the text is dwarfed by the visual and needs to be enlarged. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022

Thanks for the helpful feedback.

I complete forgot to use advanced editor , forgot to center the poem and enlarge the writing.

My mind was elsewhere. I just pressed the release button.

I appreciate you did not give me a low vote ( many would have).

keep safe!

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 03-Nov-2022

The text was small but that didn't change the writing. It only changed the reading ability. You are welcome.

Comment from Celyn

Good

This follows the rules of a 5-7-5 poem but is only about an animal because of the picture you have used. Without that it could have been about a child. I would have made the words more obviously about a dog.
Good luck with it anyway
Celyn

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022

Humour.....Sometimes I get it right , mostly not though. I guess this time I didn't.

The font was far too small also..another reviewer pointed this out to me.

My mind was elsewhere , I released the poem without even using the advanced editor to center the poem and adjust the font etc.

Usually. I check the final cut too, clearly I didn't.