Single Women of America
The National President is interviewed.38 total reviews
Comment from Sanku
A great story with a twist in the tail.At least Betsy was not scammed .What a scam they played together! thank you for sharing such an entertaining post..
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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A great story with a twist in the tail.At least Betsy was not scammed .What a scam they played together! thank you for sharing such an entertaining post..
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Sanku, thank you, this one was just for fun. Terry.
Comment from royowen
A very clever plot and outcome, the funny thing is there's some sympathy for the unscrupulous perpetrators getting away with their dastardly deed. But the truth of the matter is, it is likely something that would work.beautifully written Terry, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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A very clever plot and outcome, the funny thing is there's some sympathy for the unscrupulous perpetrators getting away with their dastardly deed. But the truth of the matter is, it is likely something that would work.beautifully written Terry, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Roy, thank you for reading. Terry.
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Welcome
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Well, at least she got half the booty:-) A fine story with a twist at the end, as many of your stories have.
You refer to her as Besty in some places and Betsy in others.
"Set" you up with our lawyers, not "sit"
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Well, at least she got half the booty:-) A fine story with a twist at the end, as many of your stories have.
You refer to her as Besty in some places and Betsy in others.
"Set" you up with our lawyers, not "sit"
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Pam, thank you for reading this little fun piece and finding my errors, they have been corrected. Terry.
Comment from Zue65
Wow, I never have guessed the twist in the end. The author proved to be creative and full of surprises which he has incorporated in the plot of his story. The conflict of the story is quite interesting which hook the readers to continue reading up to the end. I love your story. You deserved six stars. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Wow, I never have guessed the twist in the end. The author proved to be creative and full of surprises which he has incorporated in the plot of his story. The conflict of the story is quite interesting which hook the readers to continue reading up to the end. I love your story. You deserved six stars. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the very kind six-star review! Terry.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a phenomenal creative story. The TV interview seemed so real with the perfect questions and answers. I could easily envision the two ladies. The organization seemed like a massive undertaking. I smiled as I read all that was included in the database. You provided the perfect twist and surprise at the end. Great storytelling.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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This is a phenomenal creative story. The TV interview seemed so real with the perfect questions and answers. I could easily envision the two ladies. The organization seemed like a massive undertaking. I smiled as I read all that was included in the database. You provided the perfect twist and surprise at the end. Great storytelling.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Thank you reading my little fun story. Terry.
Comment from Ricky1024
This was very powerful and well written.
And,in the form of a statement about man's inability to show compassion.
Especially when it comes to a woman and her rights.
Rights to be respected.
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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This was very powerful and well written.
And,in the form of a statement about man's inability to show compassion.
Especially when it comes to a woman and her rights.
Rights to be respected.
....
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Doctor Ricky, thank you very much for the kind words. Terry.
Comment from lyenochka
Oh my! You drew us in with your great interviewing style and then made this situation believable then, WHAM! we find out we've been duped. But worse still, it seems that both Betsy and Raquel are in on this together. ? You sure know how to create some scary villainesses! Great job with this story!
Typos?
Besty Hart, Hostess of the top-rated Good (Betsy?)
"Thank you, Besty, and call me Raquel. (Betsy?)
criminal convictions to the data basis. " (database? or databases?)
This data basis will be unique to our members." (database?)
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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Oh my! You drew us in with your great interviewing style and then made this situation believable then, WHAM! we find out we've been duped. But worse still, it seems that both Betsy and Raquel are in on this together. ? You sure know how to create some scary villainesses! Great job with this story!
Typos?
Besty Hart, Hostess of the top-rated Good (Betsy?)
"Thank you, Besty, and call me Raquel. (Betsy?)
criminal convictions to the data basis. " (database? or databases?)
This data basis will be unique to our members." (database?)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Helen, for the review and finding my errors. I look and look and can't see them, and now I have Covid, and makes corrections even worse. Terry.
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Oh no! I'm sorry to hear about the Covid. What are your symptoms? Did you have all the vaccinations? Praying that you have only mild symptoms! 🙏🙏
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I had all the shots, fever, horrible cough, can?t sleep, I have the home care meds, It is what it is.
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Did they give you Paxlovid?
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No, Lagevirio, I take too many meds for Paxlovid. I did sleep last night, so maybe getting better, I do feel like someone beat up me from my knees to my chin.
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Then you did amazing writing that story when you're feeling like that. It's good they are considering all the drug interactions! 🙏💖
Comment from Wendy G
Well that was a scam of the highest order! An interesting and well-written story. Seems one can't trust too many people these days.
Wendy
Typo: "Cayman Islands"
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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Well that was a scam of the highest order! An interesting and well-written story. Seems one can't trust too many people these days.
Wendy
Typo: "Cayman Islands"
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Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Wendy, thank you for reading and catching my error. Terry.
