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Single Women of America

The National President is interviewed.

38 total reviews 
Comment from nomi338
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Beautifully conceived, wonderfully written and presented. As I read this intriguing story, I could not help thinking, "What about an organization that fights against women who falsely accuse men of assault, women who get pregnant by wealthy men so that they can hold them up for huge child support claims. I could go on, but I am sure you get me, right? I love the story.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
    Nomi, thank you the six star review. I think you may have another story, maybe you should write it. Terry
reply by nomi338 on 20-Nov-2022
    Thank you, maybe I will. But if you get the inspiration please go right ahead.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
    I got a couple Christmas stories I am working on. You should take a look at the Christmas Bonus contest I am sponsoring.
reply by nomi338 on 20-Nov-2022
    I will but be aware, I no longer celebrate holidays. It is a religious thing.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
    I get it
Comment from Sarah Robin
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Interesting post! I liked the ending. As I read the article I wondered where this was going. There are scammers everywhere. Your writing is very good and concise. Well done. Sarah

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
    Sarah, thank I am very happy you found it entertaining. Terry.
Comment from susand3022
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Hi Terry,
I suppose everyone has some gullibility in them. I'm usually the completely gullible one. Up until recently I've had a "WIPE FEET HERE" sign stenciled on my forehead. Took me over 50 years to scrub the sucker off. (pun entirely intended) Now I just won't have anything to do with the opposite sex if they want anything to do with me, besides a conversation. lol
Completely done,
Susan :)

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
    Susan, I certainly understand, thank you for reading. Terry.
Comment from karenina
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

First, Terry, I am so sorry you have Covid! I hope it's without serious complications and you move through it as uneventfully as possible. Second ~ What a funny and yet cautionary tale! I laughed out loud when you wrote:

"Bruce, I've never heard of anything like this."
"Oh, it's happened. Newspapers get lied to all the time; sometimes their reporters are the liars."
"We're just a morning show full of lightweight stuff; this topic was a little heavier than usual, but who would have thought it was a scam?"

Hah! Do you mean to imply we can't believe everything we read on the news? I'll second THAT motion!

I'm slowly getting up and running and really REALLY hope to be back posting and certainly reviewing as before.

Excellent piece, Terry.

Karenina

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
    Thank you for the six stars, and I am delighted you found it an interesting piece. As far as covid is concerned, we will see what happens. I am glad to see you getting back. Terry.
reply by karenina on 20-Nov-2022
    You're in my prayers. I've had it twice...

    Not fun, even when a "light" case...

    It's great to slowly ease my way back!
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
    Karenina, thank you. It is a really bad cough, makes sleeping difficult. I do the home meds.
Comment from Annmuma
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I thought 'scam' when I began reading this piece, but it was so well done, I couldn't truly believe 'scam' until I reached the last words. Great job. I think 'gullible' goes in both directions most of the time -- whether it costs $10 or $5 mil just depends on the source. Another great job! No spag and every sentence is directed toward the story. ann

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
    Ann, thank you for the six stars. They were crafty ladies. Terry.
Comment from Begin Again
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The unscrupulous have a way of wearing the innocent lambs clothing so well that often, more than not, we fall for every word they offer us. A clever and very interesting story. Perfect hook at the end!

Smiles and hugs, Carol

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
    Carol, I am delighted you liked the little twisted tale. Terry
Comment from Sally Law
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This is more common than we realize. Men and women ride the wave of opportunity to bamboozle the masses into giving them money. We the people are oftentimes the suckers. A fictional account with a familiar ring to it.

Sending you my best today as always, Terry!

Sal XOs

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
    Sally, thank you. Terry
reply by Sally Law on 20-Nov-2022
    Most welcome! Sal :))
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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Wow, you really had me going with this one. I was duped just like the Pullman foundation. I found this entertaining with a twist and two surprise endings...first when the television was duped then when both of the women were involved in the scam. Very interesting and sad when you think of all the scams carried on in this nation by men and by women. I had hoped this believable interview was real and was disappointed when it wasn't.
Thanks for the tale with two twists!
Jesse

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
    Thank you for reading my little twisted tale. Terry.
reply by Jesse James Doty on 20-Nov-2022
    You are well, Terry. Keep them coming!
    Jesse
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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I would have been so gullible as well. A good plot. The only hiccup for me was "We're not a dating service or matchmaking service." i would have left the first service out. 'We're not a dating or matchmaking service. Be well TB

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
    Tom, thanks for reading and for your suggestion. Terry
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Put that woman, Betsy Hart, on a list, some list, any list!
Well written. The dialogue seemed natural. Good work.
Is she on a list yet?
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
    LOL, thank you, Wayne. Terry.