Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 87 "Hush, Hush"Musings of an old man - 2022
22 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Such reverence and serenity! You set the tone in line one and carry it throughout...
I have never failed to feel nearer to God when in nature!
Even the breeze is a prayer!
Karenina
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Such reverence and serenity! You set the tone in line one and carry it throughout...
I have never failed to feel nearer to God when in nature!
Even the breeze is a prayer!
Karenina
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Yes! So very true ? so sad few people really know this.
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Honestly, I'm very touched by this piece. Every word counts and the message is very deep. Many thanks for sharing and all my very best wishes in the contest.
Blessings and good health.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Honestly, I'm very touched by this piece. Every word counts and the message is very deep. Many thanks for sharing and all my very best wishes in the contest.
Blessings and good health.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Thank you so very, very much!🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Comment from the13thpoet
Happy Thursday JLR. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Happy Thursday JLR. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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It is a Happy Day friend! Thanks for the good wishes.
Comment from Ric Myworld
As I've often said, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But I always enjoy reading what others have to say, and hope that I can decipher their poems as they've intended them to be understood. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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As I've often said, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But I always enjoy reading what others have to say, and hope that I can decipher their poems as they've intended them to be understood. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Thanks for stopping by!
Comment from June Sargent
Thank you for reminding us to pause and with mindfulness absorb the beauty and majesty of creation. God's qualities are evident in every colorful leaf and branch of a tree. Simple yet profound proof of His existence and grace.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Thank you for reminding us to pause and with mindfulness absorb the beauty and majesty of creation. God's qualities are evident in every colorful leaf and branch of a tree. Simple yet profound proof of His existence and grace.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Sending you prayers to be immersed abdundantly in Peace and Joy today and everyday evermore. 🎶🎶🙏🙏
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your faith contest entry was well thought out, JLR. I could
see you sitting quietly immersed in nature (your garden) as
God spoke to you through the trees, the birds, and other
of nature's elements. Your lines were smooth to read and
created great imagery. I liked the last line about forgoing
material things into what you need--God's beautiful things
He made for all.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Your faith contest entry was well thought out, JLR. I could
see you sitting quietly immersed in nature (your garden) as
God spoke to you through the trees, the birds, and other
of nature's elements. Your lines were smooth to read and
created great imagery. I liked the last line about forgoing
material things into what you need--God's beautiful things
He made for all.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Jan, thank you! My prayer is that all mankind could find a pause button and expreience the Glory of God in their lives.🙏🙏🎶🎶🎶
Comment from John Ciarmello
Exceptional, JLR. The eyes and ears of your heart, how beautiful and unique. This is calming and sets well in the muse. It's a beautiful entry for the contest and I wish you much success. Best JohnC
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Exceptional, JLR. The eyes and ears of your heart, how beautiful and unique. This is calming and sets well in the muse. It's a beautiful entry for the contest and I wish you much success. Best JohnC
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Thank you John C. I sure apprecaite your comments.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
I think I will never see....
Very nice poem. Very nicely written.
Great statement of faith.
Trees, yes, an amazing testament.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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I think I will never see....
Very nice poem. Very nicely written.
Great statement of faith.
Trees, yes, an amazing testament.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Wayne, thank you!
Comment from susand3022
Hi J, I don't know if you do, or if you just chose the picture, but I love living in a place of seasons, and I couldn't imagine living in a place without them. As much as I hate raking leaves, I did 10 bags just yesterday, and then had to dig more out of a drainage ditch to make sure it was cleared out... having no more bags... ugh. I do hate the clean-up, but oh, what a show! Worth every minute!
I wouldn't trade my seasons for the world, not even the skeletal one. Trees are lovely all the time.
Susan :)
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Hi J, I don't know if you do, or if you just chose the picture, but I love living in a place of seasons, and I couldn't imagine living in a place without them. As much as I hate raking leaves, I did 10 bags just yesterday, and then had to dig more out of a drainage ditch to make sure it was cleared out... having no more bags... ugh. I do hate the clean-up, but oh, what a show! Worth every minute!
I wouldn't trade my seasons for the world, not even the skeletal one. Trees are lovely all the time.
Susan :)
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Susan I stand or sit on my deck daily and marvel at our backdrop. Yes those leaves do require a bit of back-breaking labor for me to. But the salve I get in return is so soothing in my soul.
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is beautiful with lyrical phrases and deep spiritual meanings. The first verse is my favorite with the reminder that the eyes and ears of our hearts are bought with grace.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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This is beautiful with lyrical phrases and deep spiritual meanings. The first verse is my favorite with the reminder that the eyes and ears of our hearts are bought with grace.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Verna, as alwaysm thank you!
