Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 86 "I am Indigo"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from jenintorre
I enjoyed reading this poem. It is very original and well written. Great artwork. I like that colour too.I think it is a very good entry for the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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I enjoyed reading this poem. It is very original and well written. Great artwork. I like that colour too.I think it is a very good entry for the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Thanks, Jen
Comment from the13thpoet
Happy Thursday fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Happy Thursday fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the good wishes, be well, be happy in all you do!
Comment from Ric Myworld
As I've often said, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But I always enjoy reading what others have to say, and hope that I can decipher their poems as they've intended them to be understood. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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As I've often said, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But I always enjoy reading what others have to say, and hope that I can decipher their poems as they've intended them to be understood. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Thanks for stopping by!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like this poetic style, triple lines with a refrain on the last line of the first stanza. Then only the last word "Rainbow" is repeated and then it ends in "Indigo" which is rhymed by "indigo".
Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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I like this poetic style, triple lines with a refrain on the last line of the first stanza. Then only the last word "Rainbow" is repeated and then it ends in "Indigo" which is rhymed by "indigo".
Well done.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much Jasmine Girl!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry read well, Mystery Author. I enjoyed
reading it. Indigo, to me, is the most difficult color in a
rainbow to see. I liked how you explained what it is. I liked
internal rhyme real/teal. I liked the way the last line was
repeated in art until the very last.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Your contest entry read well, Mystery Author. I enjoyed
reading it. Indigo, to me, is the most difficult color in a
rainbow to see. I liked how you explained what it is. I liked
internal rhyme real/teal. I liked the way the last line was
repeated in art until the very last.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from SLMorrical
Wonderful entry for the contest. You described the color wonderfully. This flows well. I enjoyed reading it. I didn't know that indigo brings or associated with love, wisdom or even intuition. I may have to get something in indigo.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Wonderful entry for the contest. You described the color wonderfully. This flows well. I enjoyed reading it. I didn't know that indigo brings or associated with love, wisdom or even intuition. I may have to get something in indigo.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Smiling back!
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, I love this poem. Blue is such an interesting color. It is deep in meaning. I especially liked:
Get real! I'm not teal
Nor ever confused with red
(Some of us need to get our eyeglasses checked - lol.)
Well done. And now I'll leave you my signature sign-off,
keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Hello author, I love this poem. Blue is such an interesting color. It is deep in meaning. I especially liked:
Get real! I'm not teal
Nor ever confused with red
(Some of us need to get our eyeglasses checked - lol.)
Well done. And now I'll leave you my signature sign-off,
keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Ahh, yes the can see the deep blue waters flowingm thanks!
Comment from Ulla
What a wonderful poem you've written of what is your favourite colour. I loved it. So much to compare it against. I wish you the best in the contest. Great entry. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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What a wonderful poem you've written of what is your favourite colour. I loved it. So much to compare it against. I wish you the best in the contest. Great entry. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Ulla, hello, and thank you!
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I enjoyed this poem of the colors found within a rainbow, as well as the repetition of the words. Also I liked the changes from "Not by teal" and not by me" to "I am.:
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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I enjoyed this poem of the colors found within a rainbow, as well as the repetition of the words. Also I liked the changes from "Not by teal" and not by me" to "I am.:
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Sanku
That was a brilliant palette of colours spreading across a wide spectrum of blue .Finally indigo emerged as the symbol of faith, ideal and love .A very original idea.all the best in the contest
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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That was a brilliant palette of colours spreading across a wide spectrum of blue .Finally indigo emerged as the symbol of faith, ideal and love .A very original idea.all the best in the contest
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Sanku, I am very grateful for your validation and extra star!
