Suzy the Sparrow
Fallen angel14 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Was the she of whom you write, actually you, in a biographical manner. I'd have to guess you are educated with the chosen authors you profiled. Wilde was the favorite on that list. A great story herein. Well done and thanks for commenting on my Who's to blame?
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Was the she of whom you write, actually you, in a biographical manner. I'd have to guess you are educated with the chosen authors you profiled. Wilde was the favorite on that list. A great story herein. Well done and thanks for commenting on my Who's to blame?
Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Thanks so much for your lovely review. I love Wilde probably the best of all too. Love M xx
Comment from Ricky1024
When A "Fallen Angel" falls from Grace.
When An Angels wings from the Stub to the Tip.
When an Angel first temps the Laws of Gravity.
To be tested and over again to the Limit and Beyond.
White Wings, Harp and Sings.
Truly a "Heavenly Being" with no sense of Bounds.
Indestructible from the Top of Head to the Bottom of Feet.
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Within the Presence of God?
Little do we Understand.
Great Job here my Darling,
Hope all is well but as for this Angel?
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2023
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When A "Fallen Angel" falls from Grace.
When An Angels wings from the Stub to the Tip.
When an Angel first temps the Laws of Gravity.
To be tested and over again to the Limit and Beyond.
White Wings, Harp and Sings.
Truly a "Heavenly Being" with no sense of Bounds.
Indestructible from the Top of Head to the Bottom of Feet.
...
Within the Presence of God?
Little do we Understand.
Great Job here my Darling,
Hope all is well but as for this Angel?
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2023
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Thank You so so much Ricky xxx bless you x
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It's always a pleasure to work with other gifted artists.
Doctor Ricky
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Bless you always Ricky xx
Comment from Ric Myworld
You always seem to creep inside my head as if you can read my mind. Twenty-seven broken bones, including 2 broken necks, but no paralysis. Yet, whenever I stand atop the Empire State building or on the edge of a giant cliff, it is and has always been almost impossible to fight off the urge to jump. Able to fly for a bit. Thanks for sharing. Always glad to see your name pop up in my inbox.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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You always seem to creep inside my head as if you can read my mind. Twenty-seven broken bones, including 2 broken necks, but no paralysis. Yet, whenever I stand atop the Empire State building or on the edge of a giant cliff, it is and has always been almost impossible to fight off the urge to jump. Able to fly for a bit. Thanks for sharing. Always glad to see your name pop up in my inbox.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Bless you, thankyou so much for your awesome review and your wonderful comments. I have been ill which is far from unusual for me, so I really apologise for the lateness of my reply. Thanks once again your comments mean so much kindest regards Meia xxx
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I'm sorry you've been ill. I hope you're better and we'll see more of you in the near future. It's always a pleasure!
Comment from Theodore McDowell
I love this story. I especially love the note after the story that explains the intent behind the post in such an authentic, honest, and open manner. Well done. Hope all is well.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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I love this story. I especially love the note after the story that explains the intent behind the post in such an authentic, honest, and open manner. Well done. Hope all is well.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Bless you, thankyou so much for your wonderful review and your wonderful comments. I have been ill which is far from unusual for me, so I really apologise for the lateness of my reply. Thanks once again love Meia xx
Comment from Bill Schott
Wow! Meia, this is so utterly engrossing. I couldn't stop reading as I wondered where this would lead. I began to imagine it would end with a final plunge, but your revisiting of the fallen angel image was the perfect landing.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Wow! Meia, this is so utterly engrossing. I couldn't stop reading as I wondered where this would lead. I began to imagine it would end with a final plunge, but your revisiting of the fallen angel image was the perfect landing.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Bless you, thankyou so much for your amazing review and your wonderful comments. As well as the fabulous six.I have been ill which is far from unusual for me, so I really apologise for the lateness of my reply. Thanks once again love Meia xx
Comment from royowen
You are definitely a one off unique and interesting, not one to write what everyme wants to write, but 100% different. There's few uniquely different, (even though the potential is in all of us) you are the genuine article Meia, well done, have a great Christmas, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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You are definitely a one off unique and interesting, not one to write what everyme wants to write, but 100% different. There's few uniquely different, (even though the potential is in all of us) you are the genuine article Meia, well done, have a great Christmas, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Bless you, thankyou so much for your awesome review and your wonderful comments. I have been ill which is far from unusual for me, so I really apologise for the lateness of my reply. Thanks once again I know my writing is often weird to some but bless you for still reading and reviewing it love Meia xx
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My pleasure Meia
Comment from nomi338
I think that in many if not all humans, there is that tiny speck of danger that tempts us to try something that we should not. Those of us who are sane enough, resist that temptation and continue to live. The boldest and most daring of us are memorialized, their actions and motivations studied and written about. My dear, you have managed to do it again. Your writing is never dull, boring, or uninteresting.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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I think that in many if not all humans, there is that tiny speck of danger that tempts us to try something that we should not. Those of us who are sane enough, resist that temptation and continue to live. The boldest and most daring of us are memorialized, their actions and motivations studied and written about. My dear, you have managed to do it again. Your writing is never dull, boring, or uninteresting.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Bless you Nomi, thankyou so much for your awesome review and your wonderful comments. I have been ill which is far from unusual for me, so I really apologise for the lateness of my reply. Thanks once again love Meia xx
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I am willing to wait for as long a time as I have to or need to, as hearing from you for me, is a definite treat.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this post with us. It's very well written and causes the reader to ponder our lives.
but they never understood that she didn't want updrafts or wings, & fall through the clouds so that she knew what it felt like to be a tiny raindrop: & but they didn't understand that she liked accidents and crutches and bruises & governed her world, to prove that everything, even her, (You can omit 'that' in each sentence.)
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Thank you for sharing this post with us. It's very well written and causes the reader to ponder our lives.
but they never understood that she didn't want updrafts or wings, & fall through the clouds so that she knew what it felt like to be a tiny raindrop: & but they didn't understand that she liked accidents and crutches and bruises & governed her world, to prove that everything, even her, (You can omit 'that' in each sentence.)
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Bless you Barbara, thankyou so much for your awesome review and your wonderful comments. I have been ill which is far from unusual for me, so I really apologise for the lateness of my reply. Thanks once again love Meia xx
Comment from Kevin McNeany
I love the way the percentages don't add up. It's a really clever trick, jolting the reader's consciousness, and grabbing their attention.
She is afraid of flying, but not averse to falling.
I love the way that she is so damaged and broken, yet still springs back from the brink of death.
Another lovely , heart rending ,and skilfully written piece
Your work always intrigues, and often inspires. X.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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I love the way the percentages don't add up. It's a really clever trick, jolting the reader's consciousness, and grabbing their attention.
She is afraid of flying, but not averse to falling.
I love the way that she is so damaged and broken, yet still springs back from the brink of death.
Another lovely , heart rending ,and skilfully written piece
Your work always intrigues, and often inspires. X.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Bless you you are always so wonderful to me, huge hugs Meia xxx
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like my Granddaughter who loves to fly and has pushed the boundaries a few times. I loved your story Meia, because I would love to be able to fly and being stuck on the ground means the birds have all the fun. I loved the metaphor of being healed after falling too, much enjoyed, I hope you are keeping well, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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This sounds like my Granddaughter who loves to fly and has pushed the boundaries a few times. I loved your story Meia, because I would love to be able to fly and being stuck on the ground means the birds have all the fun. I loved the metaphor of being healed after falling too, much enjoyed, I hope you are keeping well, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much Dolly. I really appreciate the kind review. The character of Suzy is frightened of flying but not of falling. The metaphor is really some people want to be saved and some just cannot be. At the end, she dies. So, in the end, she was not saved. Thanks again love Meia.
