Tanka (I watched the moon)
Tanka poetry21 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
A beautifully stated tanka. The text is a great size. The message is clearly presented. I love the line~ shimmering patterns of delicate, gossamer lace.
The visual illustrates this line so well. The visual fits perfectly. I only wish the text was set up as most poems underneath the visual. However, it is still a great entry. Good luck in the contest!
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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A beautifully stated tanka. The text is a great size. The message is clearly presented. I love the line~ shimmering patterns of delicate, gossamer lace.
The visual illustrates this line so well. The visual fits perfectly. I only wish the text was set up as most poems underneath the visual. However, it is still a great entry. Good luck in the contest!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much!
