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Hello, From The Patio

Almost settled in.

9 total reviews 
Comment from karenina
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Love the play on haven/heaven...and more than that we may be twins separated at birth! A quiet moment, a slight breeze, and a streaming hot cup of coffee! Yahoo! It doesn't get much better than that!

Karenina

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
    It was a good day and place. I have had another move since that day. My final perhaps, but who knows. I'm enjoying more creature comforts. I know the end of the saga and making the most of those days in quiet peace of heart and mind. Blessings. Barbara
reply by karenina on 13-Aug-2023
    Ah. Yes. Embrace every simple pleasure. Stay light as a feather in heart and mind!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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It sounds like you may have moved house Barbara and if you have then I wish you well in your new home and hope you enjoy many cups of coffee there, bless you, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
    Thank you, Dear Dolly. Been very busy getting settled. Very happy and enjoying it. Blessings Xo. B
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Barbara, how wonderful to see you in print, and I am so happy that you are getting nicely settled in your new location. I love my coffee too. It's my companion. I think that's because coffee links me to my mother. She and I use to drink coffee together. We had coffee every night after dinner around 8 p.m. Glad to hear that you are enjoying your patio and life. It's good to get some fresh air and sun every day. Xo. Margaret

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
    Thank you so much for your wonderful review and stars. Especially for your loyal support my friens. It is so appreciated. Xo Blessings. B
Comment from lyenochka
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What a relaxing image you painted here in your 5-7-5 poem, Barbara! So glad you feel at peace and are contented with your new place! Blessings on your new home!!

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
    It is so relaxing. I often sit out and watch the sunset. I am surrounded by small mountains. Wonderful. God is good. Blessings, Helen. Xo B
reply by lyenochka on 19-Oct-2022
    Good to hear! It sounds like you really love your new place. 💖
Comment from irishauthorme
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Hey, great little commentary!
Last summer, we took out a 12' wide by 30' long area of patchy grass and laid down 237 12" X 12" brick face pavers. I buried all the wiring in conduit. Strung solar and electric lights.
We sit there many late afternoons, catch a breeze, and share our day's happenings.
Yeah, it's therapy!
irish

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
    Lovely, irish. Thank you for sharing. Blessings. Xo B
Comment from Sally Law
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Thank you so much for checking in with us. Many that don't have this idyllic life. Wink wink. I'm glad you're doing well. Blessings to you always, dear Barbara.

Sally XOs

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
    Thank you, so muchSally. Yes, idealic. Wanted to share happy now. Blessings, Xo B
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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This is a well-stated poem. The message is clear and easy to understand. The text could be larger. A visual of a steaming cup of coffee would enhance your poem. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
    Thank you, Sandra. Enlarged print and added coffee. Blessings, Xo B
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 19-Oct-2022
    I checked it out. It looks great. Thanks for being receptive to my suggestions.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
    Thank you, Sandra. They are usually spot on. Xo. B
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 20-Oct-2022
    Welcome, lady.
Comment from Fleedleflump
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I could close my eyes and imagine myself in a similar position, and also be blissfully at peace. Solace is my favourite hot drink and a gentle cooling waft that also happens to fill my nostrils with earthy caffeine :-)

Mike

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
    Yes, Mike. Total Peace. Thank you, for your visit. Blessings. Xo B
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Hello from the Patio, has the proper formatting and finds a reachable nirvana where the gentle winds, the hot java, and solitude are the stuff of paradise.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
    Thank you, Bill. Yes, It is. :). Blessings. B