Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a good 5-7-5 poem. The text can be clearly seen. The message is clearly presented, and it is beautifully worded. The visual fits well. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022

Sandra,

Thanks for your kind review. The poem earned a third place so your good wishes worked out. As mentioned, I always use 22 point type in bold serif-font text. Most often I center my lines, except for lune poems that normally align flush left.

Mark

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 31-Oct-2022

Congratulations! It was a good entry. You are welcome.

Comment from Liz Westfall

Excellent

This was a great poem. You truly captured the action and feeling of a sunset. I also really like the picture you chose for this. Good luck in the contest!!

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022

Thanks Liz!

My writing genre is these short poems. Longer ones are not in my poetry wheelhouse. My artwork typically is sourced from FanArt. Their selections are excellent.

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

It's hard to find a lot to say about these short poems. Your poem has a nice flow to the words and the artwork is perfect for the subject of the writing. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022

Thanks for your good wishes. I only write short poems, so I have little to say about long ones LOL