Midnight Roses
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Comment from RodG
We can almost smell the perfume of those summer roses and can easily understand how it can evoke memories. This Rictameter almost works, but I find the PROGRESSION of thought from lines 1-3 confusing. The rest of the poem conveys your message clearly.
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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We can almost smell the perfume of those summer roses and can easily understand how it can evoke memories. This Rictameter almost works, but I find the PROGRESSION of thought from lines 1-3 confusing. The rest of the poem conveys your message clearly.
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you Rod, I will look at it.
Melissa
