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Comment from GWHARGIS
This was delightful. I see the potential for a children's book. I liked that the ape got into show business. Seemed very appropriate. Lol. I thoroughly enjoyed this fun story in a poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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This was delightful. I see the potential for a children's book. I liked that the ape got into show business. Seemed very appropriate. Lol. I thoroughly enjoyed this fun story in a poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Gretchen, I thank you so very much for such a lovely review and words. You are always so kind and I appreciate it so very much. Thank you again, my dear friend!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry to the Tricky Rhyme contest. It's the best I have read thus far. The text size is great. The rhyme scheme makes sense and is funny in some lines. This word is misspelled~bizzaar. It should be bizarre. This phrase~these drive before~would sound better written /them driven before. You have a good entry. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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This is a good entry to the Tricky Rhyme contest. It's the best I have read thus far. The text size is great. The rhyme scheme makes sense and is funny in some lines. This word is misspelled~bizzaar. It should be bizarre. This phrase~these drive before~would sound better written /them driven before. You have a good entry. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Sandra, oops I knew I had misspelled that and forgot to change. So thank you for the reminder. I also thank you so very much for such a lovely review and words. You are always so kind and I appreciate it so very much. Thank you again, my dear friend!
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you are welcome.
Comment from Write Right Writer
Greetings...
Excellent work. Well done. Your mono-rhyme is impressive for such a long poem and your iambic hexameter is flawless. Your theme is strong and clear and your content is laser-focused and flows nicely at comfortable pace. Technically, this is quality writing. Kudos to you.
The story was fun as well, with nothing sacrificed on the altar of technical excellence. Given the confines of the contest prompt and the title of your poem, I didn't expect to like it... but I did.
Congratulations. This poem should do quite well in the contest. Keep up the great work!
Blessings...
Curt (WRW)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Greetings...
Excellent work. Well done. Your mono-rhyme is impressive for such a long poem and your iambic hexameter is flawless. Your theme is strong and clear and your content is laser-focused and flows nicely at comfortable pace. Technically, this is quality writing. Kudos to you.
The story was fun as well, with nothing sacrificed on the altar of technical excellence. Given the confines of the contest prompt and the title of your poem, I didn't expect to like it... but I did.
Congratulations. This poem should do quite well in the contest. Keep up the great work!
Blessings...
Curt (WRW)
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Curt, I thank you so very much for such a lovely review and words. You are always so kind and I appreciate it so very much. Thank you again, my dear friend!
Comment from Sugarray77
What a fun poem, and I cannot make out if has a grain of truth in it or not. But, your wonderful tale in a poem is perfect in that it hits all the requirements and makes sense too. Great job!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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What a fun poem, and I cannot make out if has a grain of truth in it or not. But, your wonderful tale in a poem is perfect in that it hits all the requirements and makes sense too. Great job!!
Melissa
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Melissa, I thank you so very much for such a lovely review and words. You are always so kind and I appreciate it so very much. Thank you again, my dear friend!
Comment from newilk
What a fun poem! this was such a whimsical read! i thoroughly enjoyed this and the rhyme scheme only made the whole thing all the more fun! this feels like the type of story i would've loved to have read as a kid!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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What a fun poem! this was such a whimsical read! i thoroughly enjoyed this and the rhyme scheme only made the whole thing all the more fun! this feels like the type of story i would've loved to have read as a kid!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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You are a gem newillk! I appreciate such kind words for my poem. You are so thoughtful and so happy that I have been having a chance to get to know you better lately. Thanks again for your awesome review, my friend.
Comment from karenina
Yikes. Sometimes these contests rules make me laugh before I even get to the submissions! I mean, really? How can one not have fun and be silly with "Pickle, Sausage, Orange, Scrooge, and Doodle.?" The photo is just whipped cream and a cherry on the sundae!
This is fun. Good silly fun.
Just what the doctor ordered!
Karenina
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Yikes. Sometimes these contests rules make me laugh before I even get to the submissions! I mean, really? How can one not have fun and be silly with "Pickle, Sausage, Orange, Scrooge, and Doodle.?" The photo is just whipped cream and a cherry on the sundae!
This is fun. Good silly fun.
Just what the doctor ordered!
Karenina
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Awe Karenina, as always, the gem of reviewers! You are so lovely and sweet, and I completely love how kind you always are. Thank you for such thoughtful words, my sweet friend.
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Awwww. Hugs to YOU!
Comment from LJbutterfly
This poem is a delight and is fun to read. All of the required words are used, and all of the rhyming flows smoothly and does not feel forced. The story line is compelling, and the artwork is perfect. Best wishes in the contest. This is a definite contender.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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This poem is a delight and is fun to read. All of the required words are used, and all of the rhyming flows smoothly and does not feel forced. The story line is compelling, and the artwork is perfect. Best wishes in the contest. This is a definite contender.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you so very much Lorraine! You are so sweet and I appreciate your lovely review and words as much as I so appreciate your generous gift of six stars. Thank you again, my dear friend.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
You did a great job. And the picture is perfect. This was a great post. I enjoyed the story line. You used each word well. Thank you for posting. Have a great evening. And good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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You did a great job. And the picture is perfect. This was a great post. I enjoyed the story line. You used each word well. Thank you for posting. Have a great evening. And good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Oh Carolyn, I thank you so very much for such a lovely review and words. You are always so sweet and I appreciate it so very much. Thank you again, my dear friend!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
What fun! Excellent job at incorporating some highly eclectic words into your story poem. Very imaginative. I would very much like to see Crabby Scrooge play the sitar.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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What fun! Excellent job at incorporating some highly eclectic words into your story poem. Very imaginative. I would very much like to see Crabby Scrooge play the sitar.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Charles, I thank you so very much for such a lovely review and words. You are always so sweet and I appreciate it so very much. Thank you again, my dear friend!
Comment from jessizero
I think "bizzaar" should be "bizarre"
Other than that, this poem was charming. I found myself rooting for the Czar. :) Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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I think "bizzaar" should be "bizarre"
Other than that, this poem was charming. I found myself rooting for the Czar. :) Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thanks Jessi. The funny thing about that word bizarre, that is how I started out with it, but auto correct kept telling me it is wrong. So I googled it and they talked about how many different ways there are to spell it, yet never told the correct one. It was very bizarre. Sure now it is showing it's right . Lol!
So thank you for that awesome feedback, because it is working for me now. Also Sweetie, I thank you so much for such Kind comments about my poem. You are always so thoughtful and sweet.
