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Precipice

The Pause

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Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written and very well worded poem you have penned. You used very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. It all went together very well. Thank you for sharing! love and blessings Teri

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
    Thank you for this lovely review Teri

    Xoxo

    Judith
Comment from Fleedleflump
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All things become clear when we find ourselves at a critical moment, and there's little more critical than hovering on the verge of a precipice. For me, this is about the contrast between past and future, the crux of fear and hope, the balance of status against risk.

Beautifully phrased.

Mike

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
    Yes, you got it. Thank you for this excellent review

    Judith