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Can I come for a visit?

I have a fantasy about visiting various friends on Fan Story

26 total reviews 
Comment from Ric Myworld
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There are plenty of nice people on this site, but not that many I'd like to sit down and have an extended conversation with. But, I must say, you certainly seem like someone who could hold my attention for hours and maybe even days. Especially, in your boat in Alaska, or even sitting with a peanut butter and jelly on a river bank. LOL. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
    Hello Ric,
    Thanks so much for the kind review and comments. If you like fishing, and the great outdoors, I'm sure we'd have a grand time. Long before I became a commercial fisherman, I spent my time fishing from a bank, first in Ohio, then Key West and Charleston SC. When I found out that people would pay me to fish, I thought I'd died and gone to heaven. When fishermen part we don't usually say good bye or good luck, but good fishing, and so I'll wish you good fishing.
    Tom
Comment from Spitfire
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You sure can! I mean, you're going to commiserate with me about anyone that annoys me. An embrace is always nice. I'll offer you wine and cheese. How's that?

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
    Hello Spitfire,
    You sound like a fun person to spend time with. I would love to come for a visit. What happens if you find that I annoy you though? Perhaps I'd better eat fast before you take it away. Thanks so much for the fun review and the laugh that I've enjoyed. You're a delight.
    Have a blessed evening.
    Tom
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Awe. This was a super uplifting poem. It would be fun to meet some of these people. I often wonder what their voices sound like. If they'd even like me. If I'd even like them. But of course, we are spread out across the world. This was a fun and friendly poem. Great job. Gretchen

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
    Thanks so much for the wonderful review Gretchen. It would be so much fun to get together with the various folks on this site. You're right, we might discover that the only thing we have in common is writing, but how would we ever find out if we didn't get a chance to visit? I don't play the lottery, but if for some reason I ever do, and happen to win, I'll foot the bill for all of us to meet somewhere and have a week of fun and relaxation and getting to know each other.
    Have a blessed evening.
    Tom
Comment from GG.
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Such healing thoughts. A truly nice poem. True, we don't know when we will be called to the great beyond to start a new chapter of our life. The poem clearly catches one of the pleasant happenings of our earthly existence, that is pleasant visits with friends. Lovely picture of the tea set. As quality a scene like Royal Albert china.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
    Hello Elisabeth,
    I'm honored by your review, thanks so much. I hope that we all meet sometime in the future. You're right, one of the most pleasant things we can do on this earth is to fellowship with our friends, old and new.
    Have a blessed evening.
    Tom
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You are welcome to come to English for afternoon tea and I will service either cucumber or marmalade sandwiches and cupcakes with a glass of Prosecco Tom? He he he, I enjoyed this musing and wouldn't be lovely for us all to meet each other, a fine write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
    Hello Dolly my friend,
    It would be heavenly to visit with you. I've never had cucumber sandwiches, though I'm awfully fond of marmalade. I'm afraid I'm an ignorant buffoon, as I'm not familiar with Prosecco either. Just enjoying your company would be a delight, though you might find me a bit rough around the edges. Thanks so much for the great review and comments. Perhaps I'll dream of marmalade sandwiches tonight.
    Have a blessed evening gal.
    Tom
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 06-Oct-2022
    How sweet you are Tom and your personality shines through here. We Brits think we are so refined when the truth is we certainly are not! You would fit well in and be welcomed here in Lichfield, love Dolly x
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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An interesting post. Yes, it would be wonderful to visit FanStory friends face to face. You fit the sentiment well in the structured poem. Well done. Hope all is well with you.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
    Hello Tim,
    Thanks so much for the great review and encouraging words. It would be so much fun to meet with the various members. One has to wonder how it would impact the way we viewed future posts from different individuals. I'm doing well, as I hope that you are.
    Have a blessed day.
    Tom
Comment from Wendy G
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I very much enjoyed your poem, and I agree - there is a special spirit of camaraderie on this site. I believe the talks and chat would flow easily about all manner of things. I enjoyed the conversational tone of this poem, as well as its smooth rhyme and metre.
Wendy

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
    Thanks so much Wendy, for the great review and comments. Isn't it grand that perfect strangers can come together, even across continents and share a love of writing. I feel a special bond with all of my Fan Story friends. Were it in my power, I would most certainly strive to visit them each in their homes.
    Have a blessed day my friend.
    Tom
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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I love this! It's so sweet and all-inclusive. It would be great if we could visit each other and have a cup of tea or a beer. The best we'll probably ever be able to do is give away a lot of ourselves to each other in the things that we write.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
    Hello Carol,
    Thanks so much for the generous review and comments. I so wish we could all meet one on one, but I believe you're probably right. I value the friendships I've made here on Fan Story and hope that if any of you had a need that I could fill, that you would let me know. Have a blessed evening gal.
    Tom
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a great job, TB, with your fun poem. Your rhymes worked
well, the lines read smoothly, and the sentiment was pleasing. Yes,
it would be great to meet FS friends. But due to logistics, most of
them will have to do the cyber thing. Your words created great
imagery of people and places that call you friend. Your last two
verses summed up the idea of not being able to meet in person--
but able to with technology.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
    Hello Jan,
    Thanks so much for the great review and comments. I consider it high praise coming from a poet as yourself. I don't usually do poems, but as I thought on a conversation that Yvonne and I had, I had to get out of bed and come write. The poem was the result of that.
    Have a blessed evening gal.
    Tom
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
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I wonder if anyone on this site has ever meet one other in person.

This is a terrific verse, as all of us can relate and probably share your sentiment.

I have a short list of people that I would love to meet and share a day with.

I appreciate the presentation, it is as vibrant and fun as your verse.

This was joy to read, I thank you for sharing.



 Comment Written 04-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
    Hello K.L.,
    Thanks so much for this thoughtful review and comments. That's a great question. I'd be curious myself. It would be so much fun to visit some of our Fan Story friends. Perhaps some day it will happen.
    Have a blessed day gal.
    Tom