Ethereal Beams
Somonka for the Japanese Poetry Club9 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A very beautiful, passionate poem. Color choice heightens the mood. Although the deeper blue makes it a little difficult to read, but lighter font would rob the emotion.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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A very beautiful, passionate poem. Color choice heightens the mood. Although the deeper blue makes it a little difficult to read, but lighter font would rob the emotion.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much, Mary. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written meditation my friend, what an amazing variety there are in Japanese poetry, they have an amazing culture, that is worth exploring. This is beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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A beautifully written meditation my friend, what an amazing variety there are in Japanese poetry, they have an amazing culture, that is worth exploring. This is beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Roy, thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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Bless you
Comment from aryr
What a fantastic picture of the young girl with the steaming cup of coffee or tea or hot chocolate, Gypsy. Your words were great with the response in one tanka and the reply in another. Blessed Be n Hugs!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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What a fantastic picture of the young girl with the steaming cup of coffee or tea or hot chocolate, Gypsy. Your words were great with the response in one tanka and the reply in another. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Aryr,
Thank you very much for your kind review and that you took the time to read and review my poem. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
"Every sunset brings the promise of a new dawn." -- Ralph Waldo Emerson
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Most welcome, Gypsy. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once againg the presentation is beautiful, from beginning to the end. I enjoyed reading. This poem is filled with passion. I could feel and see it as I read. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Once againg the presentation is beautiful, from beginning to the end. I enjoyed reading. This poem is filled with passion. I could feel and see it as I read. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Barbara,
Thank you very much for your kind review and that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
"Every sunset brings the promise of a new dawn." -- Ralph Waldo Emerson
Comment from lyenochka
There certainly is a lot of passion here! (I was a little scared about the bites as that reminded me of mosquitoes!) Great use of alliteration and your colorful presentation is always a pleasure to read!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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There certainly is a lot of passion here! (I was a little scared about the bites as that reminded me of mosquitoes!) Great use of alliteration and your colorful presentation is always a pleasure to read!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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In Spain, we give little love bites to babies and we say, "ahi que rico, que estas para comerte (you are so sweet I could eat you) if you try Google translator it wont work. I tried. LoL.
you have to be Spanish to get it. LoL
Which reminds me, my grandson will ask (voice) the phone Alexa what ever he wants to know. It's so cute to watch.
Thank you very much, big sister, it's always a delight to hear from you.
Marival ❤️
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Somonka poem -good picture presentation- theme is interesting- using suggestive metaphors describing physical contact sexual feelings and physical characteristics to paint a picture of two peoples experience and desire for one another- good job
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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I like your Somonka poem -good picture presentation- theme is interesting- using suggestive metaphors describing physical contact sexual feelings and physical characteristics to paint a picture of two peoples experience and desire for one another- good job
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and exceptional review. You are very kind.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Thomas Blanks
You always have such a beautiful presentation in addition to the words themselves. The shades of blue that changed as I scrolled were really cool. I guess that adjective reveals my age. Maybe I should have said awesome? dope? No, that is too far the other way.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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You always have such a beautiful presentation in addition to the words themselves. The shades of blue that changed as I scrolled were really cool. I guess that adjective reveals my age. Maybe I should have said awesome? dope? No, that is too far the other way.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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I use 'cool' too. LOL we are probably close in age.
Thank you very much, Thomas, I appreciate your kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Dr. Von
This is a wonderfully written SOMONKA poem. The stanzas are inviting exchanges that you worded with enticing cues. There is clear intent to harness the reader to the memories of the physical expressions of love. Your message is well stated. I like it.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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This is a wonderfully written SOMONKA poem. The stanzas are inviting exchanges that you worded with enticing cues. There is clear intent to harness the reader to the memories of the physical expressions of love. Your message is well stated. I like it.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much, Dr Von. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
"Hand over the chocolate and nobody gets hurt."
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You are welcome.
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is, without a doubt, beautifully written with so much passion, visual words, and color. Steamy and provocative! I loved everything about this piece. Best, JohnC.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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This is, without a doubt, beautifully written with so much passion, visual words, and color. Steamy and provocative! I loved everything about this piece. Best, JohnC.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much, Dr Von. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
"Hand over the chocolate and nobody gets hurt."
