Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

Very well done rondeau. Your words are very descriptive and one can "feel" the mood through your words.
I wish you well in the contest.
Best wishes and regards,
Mary

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022

thanks

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the A rondeau poem contest.

I gave up on contests long ago, now I just enter free site contests, no more prompts.

You grasped the rondeau form well. Nice presentation. Your descriptive words flow well expressing clear mental imagery.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022

thanks as always