cat
Haiku21 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Yes, Sanku, kitties are just as your expressed in your haiku.
They are laid back in their own world. The humans (owners)
are at their beck and call. I enjoyed your haiku. Great job with
its style. The art choice paired with your well thought out
words perfectly.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Yes, Sanku, kitties are just as your expressed in your haiku.
They are laid back in their own world. The humans (owners)
are at their beck and call. I enjoyed your haiku. Great job with
its style. The art choice paired with your well thought out
words perfectly.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much .I am glad you liked it.
Comment from mermaids
I have been owned by cats all my life, currently have two felines who live with me. Love your words"live on my own terms". It is a perfect description of feline behavior. Your haiku form creates a clear image of the cat.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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I have been owned by cats all my life, currently have two felines who live with me. Love your words"live on my own terms". It is a perfect description of feline behavior. Your haiku form creates a clear image of the cat.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thanks once again for this honour.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Your animal haiku made me chuckle. Now wouldn't that be the life. I have a big boy of a Maine Coon cat. Spoiled rotten. He dictates in not so subtle ways exactly what he wants when he wants it.
Great haiku!
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Your animal haiku made me chuckle. Now wouldn't that be the life. I have a big boy of a Maine Coon cat. Spoiled rotten. He dictates in not so subtle ways exactly what he wants when he wants it.
Great haiku!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much.From one cat lover to the other.
Comment from Terry Broxson
I too love cats. There is no doubt that somewhere my wife of forty-four years is reincarnated as a cat, maybe looks like this one. This is an excellent haiku, thank you for writing it. Excellent work. Terry.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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I too love cats. There is no doubt that somewhere my wife of forty-four years is reincarnated as a cat, maybe looks like this one. This is an excellent haiku, thank you for writing it. Excellent work. Terry.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Did she also loved cats? I remember your poem about your wife Zoe. May that cat will soon come to you
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting.
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Zoe was a true Cat Lady.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have often thought if there was such a thing as reincarnation, I would want to come back and as a cat and live in my house. They have it so easy. Thank you for sharing this cute poem and artwork with us.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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I have often thought if there was such a thing as reincarnation, I would want to come back and as a cat and live in my house. They have it so easy. Thank you for sharing this cute poem and artwork with us.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for stopping by to read. True I too wish that in my next life I would be a cat.
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a perfect picture. The words sleek and sixth sense are perfect in describing a cat. They do everything sleek. From their coats to their almost boneless quality. I enjoyed your haiku. Gretchen
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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This was a perfect picture. The words sleek and sixth sense are perfect in describing a cat. They do everything sleek. From their coats to their almost boneless quality. I enjoyed your haiku. Gretchen
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
It's a dog's.. cat's life. Love your poem. With just three lines you make me feel jealous of a cat's life. They sure do have it made! They even keep their independence. Great job.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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It's a dog's.. cat's life. Love your poem. With just three lines you make me feel jealous of a cat's life. They sure do have it made! They even keep their independence. Great job.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I'd love to be a
sleek laid back cat with sixth sense
live on my own terms
The only thing stopping you, is you, isn't it. When given thought the sixth sense inhabits everyone not lacking the ability to think. Every word we speak, is organized with words before and after the last. We look to see but overlook most of the miracles surrounding us.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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I'd love to be a
sleek laid back cat with sixth sense
live on my own terms
The only thing stopping you, is you, isn't it. When given thought the sixth sense inhabits everyone not lacking the ability to think. Every word we speak, is organized with words before and after the last. We look to see but overlook most of the miracles surrounding us.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much. I saw you in were in Terry Broxon's party.
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yes, it was quite the shindig and I felt "special" to be included. :-)
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
The picture of the cat is adorable. And it would be great to live like some cats, treated like a princess or prince. Cats are much cleaner than any other animal. My youngest sister loves cats. There is nothing wrong with a cat or dog living in your home if you keep them and your house clean.
There are some people who neglect the animals and themself. Thank you for the great poem. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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The picture of the cat is adorable. And it would be great to live like some cats, treated like a princess or prince. Cats are much cleaner than any other animal. My youngest sister loves cats. There is nothing wrong with a cat or dog living in your home if you keep them and your house clean.
There are some people who neglect the animals and themself. Thank you for the great poem. Have a great day.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much.And once again am honoure to have a six star from you.
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You are welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, the cat always lives on her own terms! You have such wonderful descriptions of a cat's character --"love to be a
sleek laid back cat with sixth sense"
My only suggestion would be to make the first line as:
I'd love to be a
Unless this is the cat who's talking.
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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Yes, the cat always lives on her own terms! You have such wonderful descriptions of a cat's character --"love to be a
sleek laid back cat with sixth sense"
My only suggestion would be to make the first line as:
I'd love to be a
Unless this is the cat who's talking.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the suggestion .I have altered it ...I'm someone who'd puts myself last .May be that's why I love to be a cat .Just getting fed upof that role!!
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Good! That's part of maturing. I think we moms finally realize we need to take care of ourselves, too! 💖💖
