cat
Haiku21 total reviews
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is a great Animal Spirit poem. Haha. Cats are sneaky and it does seem to have a sixth sense for things. I'm not too familiar with them. I hear that cats will make you crazy about them by sending a parasite to their owners. and mice. So mice will run to them and the owners will love them very much.
Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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This is a great Animal Spirit poem. Haha. Cats are sneaky and it does seem to have a sixth sense for things. I'm not too familiar with them. I hear that cats will make you crazy about them by sending a parasite to their owners. and mice. So mice will run to them and the owners will love them very much.
Well done.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for the interesting comments. They are no doubts self sufficient.
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
Good work. I think the best haikus are those in which the three lines not only work together but also independently present an image or sense. If you are looking for improvement, it would be that first line which can't stand on its own. But overall, nicely done.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Good work. I think the best haikus are those in which the three lines not only work together but also independently present an image or sense. If you are looking for improvement, it would be that first line which can't stand on its own. But overall, nicely done.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much.It is expected in haiku that the first two lines form a grammatically correct sentence,followed by the satori.I am not sure if I can bring a total picture in the first line.
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was a real treat to me as a cat lover. I have my black cat Sabrina and she is a queen in my castle (smile). She especially enjoys my Florida room and spends her whole days there, watching birds, iguanas and squirrels.
You fit so much in these lines, but mainly your love for those feline enchanters.
Thank you so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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This was a real treat to me as a cat lover. I have my black cat Sabrina and she is a queen in my castle (smile). She especially enjoys my Florida room and spends her whole days there, watching birds, iguanas and squirrels.
You fit so much in these lines, but mainly your love for those feline enchanters.
Thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much.I am also an unashamed lover of cats. In fact in India they are not popular .many has asked me 'if you want a pet why not keep a dog, why a cat"
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned for the Animal Spirit Haiku club. My husband and I love cats also. We have many. They are neat to where they want to be waited on and loved on alot! I wish you the best in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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This is a very well written poem you have penned for the Animal Spirit Haiku club. My husband and I love cats also. We have many. They are neat to where they want to be waited on and loved on alot! I wish you the best in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much .I just love those creature !
Comment from royowen
Yep, I think you definitely nailed this one. They are certainly at the physical pinnacle of God's creation, physically adept, sleek and self possessed and very attractive, beautifully written blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Yep, I think you definitely nailed this one. They are certainly at the physical pinnacle of God's creation, physically adept, sleek and self possessed and very attractive, beautifully written blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much .God bless!
Comment from karenina
I enjoyed this. I was always grateful my cats allowed me to live in their home, frankly...
I was curiously deceived that I was in charge...
Those clever felines! They knew just how to stroke my ego!
Smile...
Karenina
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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I enjoyed this. I was always grateful my cats allowed me to live in their home, frankly...
I was curiously deceived that I was in charge...
Those clever felines! They knew just how to stroke my ego!
Smile...
Karenina
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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ha ha but true ! they do allow you concessions sometimes.
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True...
They do bestow the honor of cleaning their litter box!
:)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Sanku,
Excellent entry for the animal spirit haiku club. You chose a wonderful animal--cat-- they are such amazing creatures and have very strong personalities. I like how independent they are. Nice presentation. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Hello, Sanku,
Excellent entry for the animal spirit haiku club. You chose a wonderful animal--cat-- they are such amazing creatures and have very strong personalities. I like how independent they are. Nice presentation. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much .I am glad you liked it.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is a wonder example of a haiku, as it captures he essence of a cat.
I would consider a larger font, this is a little hard to read.
The second line reads:
"sleek laid back cat"
did you mean black cat?
I like the attitude of this verse. You are correct that cats live on their own terms, maybe we should take that characteristic and use it ourselves.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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This is a wonder example of a haiku, as it captures he essence of a cat.
I would consider a larger font, this is a little hard to read.
The second line reads:
"sleek laid back cat"
did you mean black cat?
I like the attitude of this verse. You are correct that cats live on their own terms, maybe we should take that characteristic and use it ourselves.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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No ,I meant Laid-back .I Think I should have put a hyphen or written as one word.Thank you for point it out.
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Thank makes perfect sense.
Have a great day.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a good poem about the character of cats. It has a good last line.
You can also go with having nine lives.
Nice entry or the haiku club, Sanku.
Joan
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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This is a good poem about the character of cats. It has a good last line.
You can also go with having nine lives.
Nice entry or the haiku club, Sanku.
Joan
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much .
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You are most welcome, Sanku.
Joan
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Sanku.
-You wrote a good haiku for the given prompt.
-The imagery shows how much you appreciate
the beauty of a cat, and would also like to have their "sixth sense."
-A very good satori line completes the poem very well.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Sanku.
-You wrote a good haiku for the given prompt.
-The imagery shows how much you appreciate
the beauty of a cat, and would also like to have their "sixth sense."
-A very good satori line completes the poem very well.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much.
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You are welcome.
