Alone
Rictameter7 total reviews
Comment from Michaela Moore
Ethereal and profound. Simple but oh, so profound. Each word rings a bell of meaning that forms a melody of emotion and grace. Wow! I am in awe of the wonder of your mighty pen.
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Ethereal and profound. Simple but oh, so profound. Each word rings a bell of meaning that forms a melody of emotion and grace. Wow! I am in awe of the wonder of your mighty pen.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2022
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and well written rictameter you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. Teri
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This is a very interesting and well written rictameter you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. Teri
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
It's a well-written poem. The message is clear. The font size is great. It's easy for others to see the light when they are not alone and in the darkness surrounding the alone person. I can understand the speaker's feelings. The visual fits perfectly. Thanks for sharing your poem.
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It's a well-written poem. The message is clear. The font size is great. It's easy for others to see the light when they are not alone and in the darkness surrounding the alone person. I can understand the speaker's feelings. The visual fits perfectly. Thanks for sharing your poem.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your rictameter, Wils. Its
presentation is perfect in color scheme, image choice,
and word choices and syllables. You give readers much
to think about with your well-thought-out poem. The
word alone fit perfectly as the first and last word.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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You did a great job with your rictameter, Wils. Its
presentation is perfect in color scheme, image choice,
and word choices and syllables. You give readers much
to think about with your well-thought-out poem. The
word alone fit perfectly as the first and last word.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
Comment from GWHARGIS
I believe that is called poetic license. Lol. I liked that it wasn't too dark and hopeless. You mentioned that you have been told of the light. Which means you are open to finding it. Great poem. I liked the easy flow to it. It had a melancholy flavor but wasn't hopeless. Gretchen
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I believe that is called poetic license. Lol. I liked that it wasn't too dark and hopeless. You mentioned that you have been told of the light. Which means you are open to finding it. Great poem. I liked the easy flow to it. It had a melancholy flavor but wasn't hopeless. Gretchen
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your subject matter is clear in your poem. This is powerful writing that for me describes depression and how it can hold one down with it's weight. Well written and very descriptive. A powerful write.
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Your subject matter is clear in your poem. This is powerful writing that for me describes depression and how it can hold one down with it's weight. Well written and very descriptive. A powerful write.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
Comment from Sally Law
Interesting offering from you, Geoff, and so deep and serious. I enjoy this unique form and won a contest once, I think. :)) a wonderful offering today and deeply impacting. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))
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Interesting offering from you, Geoff, and so deep and serious. I enjoy this unique form and won a contest once, I think. :)) a wonderful offering today and deeply impacting. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
