Pearl Wedding
Love is not spoken it is lived.12 total reviews
Comment from jacquelyn popp
This is quite a beautiful poem. It sounds like 30 wonderful years. I like the way the poem is written with the rhyme, and talks of everlasting love. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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This is quite a beautiful poem. It sounds like 30 wonderful years. I like the way the poem is written with the rhyme, and talks of everlasting love. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thanks for taking time to read and review my poem. Thirty years has gone quickly. Glad you enjoyed the poem. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment from Liz Westfall
What a sweet and simple love poem. You chose a great picture to go along with it too. Your rhyme scheme worked well and added to the flow of the piece. Good luck in the contest!
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What a sweet and simple love poem. You chose a great picture to go along with it too. Your rhyme scheme worked well and added to the flow of the piece. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Liz,
Thanks for taking the time to read and reviewmy poem. Glad you enjoyed it. The poem ran in second in the contest. There was some pretty hot competition. Take care and have a lovely day.
Regards
Barry Penfold
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
Cute and snappy love poem that artfully avoids all the land mine words. Good job. I celebrated my 31st anniversary this year. Perhaps I should write my wife a poem?
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Cute and snappy love poem that artfully avoids all the land mine words. Good job. I celebrated my 31st anniversary this year. Perhaps I should write my wife a poem?
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Well done on the 31 years. Well I am sure she would treasure any poem you wrote. Thanks for taking the timeto read and review my poem.
Regards
Barry Penfold
Comment from Rachel Clark
This was very sweet and loving. I definitely can feel the sentiment behind these vows considering I am lucky enough to also have met my true companion. Thank you for sharing it was very sweet.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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This was very sweet and loving. I definitely can feel the sentiment behind these vows considering I am lucky enough to also have met my true companion. Thank you for sharing it was very sweet.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Rachel,
Thanks for taking time to read and review my poem. Glad you enjoyed it . Take care and have a great day .
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment from jessizero
This was such a sweet, romantic poem. You did a great job with the writing prompt. I am impressed and touched that you have been together all this time. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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This was such a sweet, romantic poem. You did a great job with the writing prompt. I am impressed and touched that you have been together all this time. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thanks for your review . The poem ran in second and I am so glad you enjoyed it. Hope you are having a good day and take care.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment from Wendy G
You have written a beautiful love poem, simple, clear and with fine rhyme and metre. It is sincere and meaningful, and I send best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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You have written a beautiful love poem, simple, clear and with fine rhyme and metre. It is sincere and meaningful, and I send best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Wendy,
Once again thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem. It ran in second and I am quite happy about it. You take care and have a lovely day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
-Excellent poem entry for Love Poem writing prompt contest. Congratulations on 30 years of marriage and still in-love
-Nice presentation and picture... it's so cool.
-Your descriptive words flow well expressing a clear expression of romantic love. Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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-Excellent poem entry for Love Poem writing prompt contest. Congratulations on 30 years of marriage and still in-love
-Nice presentation and picture... it's so cool.
-Your descriptive words flow well expressing a clear expression of romantic love. Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Gypsy,
Thanks for the great review. Thirty years seems to have gone so quickly. The poem ran in second. Take care and have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
I enjoyed reading your poem. You followed the rules and did not use any of the words for the contest. It is great that you have been together and would do it over again. And I liked you saying, your life has been a treasure together. Thank you for sharing. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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I enjoyed reading your poem. You followed the rules and did not use any of the words for the contest. It is great that you have been together and would do it over again. And I liked you saying, your life has been a treasure together. Thank you for sharing. Have a great day.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Carolyn,
Thanks so much for the six star rating. The poem came in second in the contest. Glad you enjoyed it. Thirty years has gone so quick. Have a great day.
Cheers
Barry.
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You are welcome.
Comment from lancellot
This is very sweet and I really do like the eternal love theme of the poem.
Okay, since you have a period on the last sentence of each stanza, I think you either should remove them both, or make all the lines complete. Also, good luck in the contest. This is very nice.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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This is very sweet and I really do like the eternal love theme of the poem.
Okay, since you have a period on the last sentence of each stanza, I think you either should remove them both, or make all the lines complete. Also, good luck in the contest. This is very nice.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thanks for your suggestions. They are much appreiated. The poem came in second, in what was a pretty competitive field. Hope you have a great day. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Cheers
Barry Penfold
Comment from Raul1
This couple has been together for thirty years and will always be with each other. Your poem is romantic. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. I like it. Good luck in the contest!
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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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This couple has been together for thirty years and will always be with each other. Your poem is romantic. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. I like it. Good luck in the contest!
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Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Raul,
Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed it and for your information the poem ran into second place. You have a great day and take care.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
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Congratulations! This is great news! Thank you and the same to you too!
